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RE: All Night Laundry - In which they all do sometimes - 2018 11 28
11-29-2018, 08:49 AM
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It seems like this is probably a lost cause, but:
>Ask 12 if there is anything, at all, within the expansive realm of things possible with time travel, that could possibly prove 3's innocence to her. If the answer is no, then drop it. Theres no point in trying to convince someone like that.
(You still take suggestions here right?)
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which they all do sometimes - 2018 11 28
11-29-2018, 09:18 AM
That doesn't apply when the person you're trying to persuade is yourself. Bina already knows everything she needs to know about Twelve, because she knows what would get herself to that point.
This isn't about proof. It's about emotional state.
Twelve is pinning things on Three because there's a lot about the whole situation that doesn't make any sense. Blaming Three allows her to have a sensible explanation, so she's clinging to that.
The conversations we've seen read less like Twelve is trying to stop Three and more like she's trying to get a confession.
Not that I'm sure where to move from there, but that's the definite impression I'm getting.
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which she wont fight this her - 2018 11 29
11-30-2018, 06:43 AM
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UPDATE - 2020 - In which she wont fight this her
Hey Ten! I do take suggestions still... teeeechnically, but I have been using them less and less as I try to get to the end of the story. So while I do still appreciate all the suggestions I get here, and on the pages themselves, I can't really use them all that much, as I am really trying to thread the needle and get to an ending that makes sense.
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which she wont fight this her - 2018 11 29
11-30-2018, 07:45 AM
Link goes to 2019.
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which Mrs. Pak is not amused - 2018 11 30
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which Mrs. Pak is not amused - 2018 11 30
12-02-2018, 02:43 AM
yeah ive gotten that impression, its fine. I think its more important you manage to satisfyingly conclude the story then incorporate suggestions.
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which what ABOUT her? - 2018 12 02
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which what ABOUT her? - 2018 12 02
12-04-2018, 12:43 AM
Flash the other Amie with a neuralizer to make her forget everything. You do have one of those, right?
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which nothing is ever easy - 2018 12 03
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which there's no reason it shouldn't - 2018 12 04
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which a sense of adventure is a fragile thing - 2018 12 08
12-10-2018, 01:57 AM
Onward! Into ADVENTURE!!
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which Marie has some strange customers - 2018 12 10
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which Marie has some strange customers - 2018 12 10
12-11-2018, 09:09 PM
*pounds fists on table, chanting* BANANA, BANANA, BANANA
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which she finds a better one - 2018 12 11
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which it feels weird to everyone - 2018 12 14
12-15-2018, 07:32 AM
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which it feels weird to everyone - 2018 12 14
12-15-2018, 06:22 PM
That should be 2035, in both the post and the link.
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which he found it, eventually - 2018 12 16
12-17-2018, 07:21 AM
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RE: All Night Laundry - In which he probably wont - 2018 12 17
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