The Grand Battle [Game Over!]

Originally posted on MSPA by dexexe1234.

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SpoilerSeeing how I'm not involved in this story, would it be fair for me to share who I think should go this round and why? Because with everyone ganging up on Lutherion, I worried he may be the first to go, and dexexe's parts are some of the better written ones.

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Spoilerit doesnt really matter to me if Lutherion gets killed of! he was a character i wanted to try, and to see that i could create this insanity that he embodies! and i guess it worked!

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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SpoilerMy only gripe about Dex's writing is it's frequently not typed correctly, although that's just me being picky.

Originally posted on MSPA by Draykon.

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SpoilerI recall the idea being that anyone reading geds a vote. But honestly, meaning no offense to him, I've been going after Lutherion simply because I find Dexexe's posts tend to be poorly written- though often hilarious.

Originally posted on MSPA by Aryogaton.

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Spoiler^ Agreed, though no offense to Dex of course.

Originally posted on MSPA by dexexe1234.

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Spoileri knew i would be bad at writing! one must also think of that english isnt precisely the native lagnuage of my area [img]images/smilies/icon_winky.gif[/img] so yeah! im about 95% out of this, so and early goodbye my friends!

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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((Don't leave us, Dex! We love you!))

Originally posted on MSPA by PawntoD4.

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SpoilerI think we should wait for a vote still. I personally really enjoy dexes posts.

Originally posted on MSPA by Dragon Fogel.

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SpoilerYeah, and he's created a character the rest of us have had a lot of fun working into our sections.

I'd say he's doing a good job, his writing is just a bit unpolished. Which is entirely understandable, since English isn't his first language.

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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SpoilerYeah, and he's created a character the rest of us have had a lot of fun working into our sections.

I'd say he's doing a good job, his writing is just a bit unpolished. Which is entirely understandable, since English isn't his first language.

((Where's he from?))

Originally posted on MSPA by Dragon Fogel.

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(He's from Denmark, if memory serves.)

Originally posted on MSPA by dexexe1234.

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((yes its right! im from denmark! you can even see it below my avatar!))

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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((yes its right! im from denmark! you can even see it below my avatar!))

((His grammar seems fine. It's his punctuation that's killing him.))

Originally posted on MSPA by Draykon.

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SpoilerPunctuation, capitalization, and line breaks are what I find make it bad. Plus I don't think present tense is really appropriate for this, but then again a number of others have been typing in present tense as well, so meh.

Originally posted on MSPA by andanotherone.

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AT is sick. she can't come.

Originally posted on MSPA by dexexe1234.

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Spoilerif my writing is SO bad, then ill gladly kill myself of! or volunteer to be written out of the story! i was never a writer and ill never be a writer! so im sorry that i have offended someone with my bad writing skills. [img]images/smilies/icon_smile.gif[/img]

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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SpoilerPunctuation, capitalization, and line breaks are what I find make it bad. Plus I don't think present tense is really appropriate for this, but then again a number of others have been typing in present tense as well, so meh.

((I'm guilty of switching between past and present tense. =<))

if my writing is SO bad, then ill gladly kill myself of! or volunteer to be written out of the story! i was never a writer and ill never be a writer! so im sorry that i have offended someone with my bad writing skills. [img]images/smilies/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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If my writing is SO bad, then I'll gladly kill myself off! Or volunteer to be written out of the story! I was never a writer and I never will be a writer! So I'm sorry that I have offended someone with my bad writing skills.

Dex, your writing is far from painful to read. There are tons of English speakers (where English is their first language) who write atrociously when they don't have to write correctly. You're fine.

Originally posted on MSPA by Dragon Fogel.

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SpoilerI think my main recommendation to dexexe would be to make more line breaks. Right now, he often doesn't use any; more of them would make it easier to read his pieces.

Originally posted on MSPA by cyber95.

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I'm back, and I'm going to use this opportunity to start the poll. I'll put up two people for elimination per round (unless there are like, three people that I can't decide between, but I'll try to narrow it down to two).
Gameplay will continue as normal, even as the poll runs.

As many of you have predicted, Lutherion Maw is in danger of being eliminated. This was kind of an upsetting choice for me to make, because dex's posts were always fun to read, and Lutherion is such a fun and crazy character. Unfortunately, the lack of punctuation and such makes it look less like it was written to be a story, and more like it was written to be for, well, a forum. So, that's option one.

Second up is Dorukomets. This choice doesn't have much to do with writing, but activity. almost-there hasn't been posting much at all, and as such, Dorukomets isn't really in this story. He's made cameo appearances, but we don't want to have a character that doesn't do anything. The beginning of the game is a place to get rid of people who don't update, so that there's a good flow of story from everybody. I would have liked to be able to give a better analysis of your writing, almost, but your posts have been both few in number, and very short.

Oddguy's posts also haven't been all that great in number, but there are more than almost-there's, and his latest story section was of a fairly okay length to judge some writing skills, so Nathan isn't on the poll.

Do these choices seem fair?

(revoting is enabled in case you find either player redeems themselves after you've voted them out)

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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((Yeah, the two choices seem fine.))

Originally posted on MSPA by almost-there.

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i'm screwed. my keyboard was onnn the fritz, and i could barely update. against dex, i stand a ghost of a chance.
bye, everybody.

Originally posted on MSPA by andanotherone.

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If he loses I win.

Originally posted on MSPA by cyber95.

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If he loses I win.

You're giving me this urge to name the mysterious guy who arranged this tournament 'Andy'.


I won't do it, but the idea's there.

Originally posted on MSPA by almost-there.

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congrats on 300 posts.
ALSO IT'S A BET. LOL.

Originally posted on MSPA by bobthepen.

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against dex, i stand a ghost of a chance.

I see whatcha did thar.

Originally posted on MSPA by fait.

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((Wow, it's, like, tied. ._.))