Re: Grand Battle Character Review/Critique Thread
07-22-2011, 12:23 AM
Solaris: I'm not sure what to say on your Space Pope; my planned villain is also religiously-themed and is from space, so I feel a little awkward commenting when there are those similarities, even if the characters are probably going to be very different.
Ix: I really like the concept here. As far as the shop goes... perhaps you could have it where the shop stocks its own shelves and Liz has no control of what's on there? So if she has to grab something from the shop, she has to settle for whatever it's offering at that moment.
(Also: Pinary has a severe phobia of jellyfish. It might be a good idea to change the shape of the cane.)
Ix: I really like the concept here. As far as the shop goes... perhaps you could have it where the shop stocks its own shelves and Liz has no control of what's on there? So if she has to grab something from the shop, she has to settle for whatever it's offering at that moment.
(Also: Pinary has a severe phobia of jellyfish. It might be a good idea to change the shape of the cane.)
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