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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 7/16 - it fears you
05-20-2017, 10:45 AM
(05-20-2017, 05:20 AM)☆ C.H.W.O.K.A ☆ Wrote: »took you long enough
Let's go with this.
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05-20-2017, 05:42 PM
8/16.
in which a reunion ensues.
Finally.
"Where's your master...?"
She hesitates, flits away.
Soon, she returns with him.
You both stare.
What do you say?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 8/16 - a reunion ensues
05-20-2017, 06:18 PM
prepare to die
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 8/16 - a reunion ensues
05-20-2017, 09:18 PM
Why did you do it?
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9/16.
in which a confrontation follows.
"Why?"
Silence. You lunge first.
Under his direction, she becomes your opponent.
"Eloa—"
"Just go quietly!"
Why can't you afford to hesitate?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 9/16 - a confrontation follows
05-20-2017, 10:55 PM
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 9/16 - a confrontation follows
05-20-2017, 10:58 PM
flinching is for LOSERS
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 9/16 - a confrontation follows
05-20-2017, 11:38 PM
They're far stronger than you under normal circumstances.
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 9/16 - a confrontation follows
05-21-2017, 01:11 AM
You've hesitated once before - and you know not to make the same mistake twice.
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05-21-2017, 02:41 AM
10/16.
in which flinching is for losers.
You behead her, and charge.
Your blade finds his side—
Smoke?
"You're... undead."
He smiles bitterly.
How is this good news?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 10/16 - flinching is for losers
05-21-2017, 02:56 AM
the undead can't unlive
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 10/16 - flinching is for losers
05-21-2017, 03:37 AM
Your sword can hurt them, which little else can.
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 10/16 - flinching is for losers
05-21-2017, 06:42 AM
It gives him a last chance at redemption
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05-22-2017, 03:41 AM
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SpoilerNearing the end of the verse! Well done on the coherence thing. Bless your souls.
It's early to say, but there's an intermission between verses 4 and 5/8 and 9 where we pull our omniscience card and fill in some gaps. Don't feel too pressed to tidy anything up within the next 20 updates, and have a good time. :D
11/16.
in which he can still atone.
"If I die here, no-one'll stop Esgil."
The wound smokes through his fingers.
"It likes him better."
Why do you believe him?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 11/16 - he can still atone
05-22-2017, 04:16 AM
The doctor is pretty unlikeable
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05-23-2017, 07:17 AM
12/16.
in which the Devil has a point.
"Even demons think I've shit taste."
He laughs, then winces, bracing his side.
"...You deserved better."
When did you stop loving him?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 12/16 - the Devil has a point
05-23-2017, 08:29 AM
When the Devil tore your heart out
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 12/16 - the Devil has a point
05-23-2017, 12:22 PM
You couldn't point to a specific moment. Whatever there once was simply faded over time.
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 12/16 - the Devil has a point
05-23-2017, 01:53 PM
He held you on a pedestal that nobody else could reach. He didn't care about anyone else but you, and it drove you mad.
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13/16.
in which you simply grew apart.
"Don't start. Please."
You help him up while he mends.
"Where's Esgil now?"
"Ah..."
Hours pass.
How do you feel about the odds of stopping Esgil?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 12/16 - the Devil has a point
05-24-2017, 05:39 AM
With your current resources, you're fucked
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 13/16 - you simply grew apart
05-24-2017, 03:16 PM
slim. slimjim odds
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14/16.
in which you're basically fucked.
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Spoiler climax incoming soon! Let's make it count.
"You can't. There's an army--"
"Help me raise forces."
"You're bad as him!"
"We're powerless elsewise."
How will you start, and what are you feeling?
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 13/16 - you simply grew apart
05-25-2017, 12:32 AM
> Setting up the battlefield, trepidation.
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RE: Sixteenths - Verse 3, 13/16 - you simply grew apart
05-25-2017, 12:50 AM
Call in favors accrued over your journeys.
You feel regret that it has come to this, but can't see a way out.
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