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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 03:05 AM
um.... everything in that order? 1, 2, 3 and 4
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 03:08 AM
If you want Alice to repent, I'd say now's a good way of getting her to do so without antagonizing her.
>3
That's also the one I would start with, just because I'd be worried.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 06:39 AM
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>3.
>Derrick: Apologize profusely for anything inappropriate you might've done while drunk, and promise that you'll never drink again. Mention you can still feel your hands and hips sore, and Alice mentioned having to restrain you. You get this nagging sensation that you might've become violent and hurt her.
We need to somehow have this lovey-dovey conversation take a turn for the awkward.
We need to plant the seed of doubt in Derrick's mind.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 07:55 AM
I'm gonna go with >2 , seems like the most natural opener. Everything else sorta flows from there.
I don't think trying to put her on the spot with >3 is going to have much of an effect. Alice is an excellent liar after all.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 12:14 PM
(05-19-2016, 06:39 AM)neferiusNexus Wrote: »>3.
>Derrick: Apologize profusely for anything inappropriate you might've done while drunk, and promise that you'll never drink again. Mention you can still feel your hands and hips sore, and Alice mentioned having to restrain you. You get this nagging sensation that you might've become violent and hurt her.
We need to somehow have this lovey-dovey conversation take a turn for the awkward.
We need to plant the seed of doubt in Derrick's mind.
But then Derrick might think he did something to her. I mean, I'm all for Derrick finding out what Alice did to him, but I think Derrick will start to blame himself if we go about it in the wrong way. :c
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 12:15 PM
seconding NN
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 12:42 PM
(05-19-2016, 12:15 PM)Lylac Wrote: »seconding NN
it's not gonna work guys...it's already been confirmed by ip a thousand times that derrick's not going to just distrust sister even if it smacks him in the face and he has absolutely no reason to think he became violent towards her, which was already covered by sister telling him he fell a bunch of times and she cleaned + carried him up to bed
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05-19-2016, 01:04 PM
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 01:25 PM
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 04:51 PM
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Yes, ICGC, Alice is innocent, she's just so embarrassed, ashamed, and disgusted that she couldn't stop the
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EDITTT: >3, like most people want.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 05:22 PM
Let's start with the first one.
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05-19-2016, 05:26 PM
> The hidden fifth option: Pancakes.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 05:29 PM
(05-19-2016, 05:26 PM)The One Guy Wrote: »> The hidden fifth option: Be the Pancakes.
i agree
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 06:13 PM
No guys what are you saying!?! 
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05-19-2016, 06:21 PM
(05-19-2016, 06:13 PM)ActivelyAnonymous Wrote: »No guys what are you saying!?!
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Oh god, you mean to say that Alice has been making crêpes rather than pancakes this entire time?! She's even more evil than I thought!
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 07:32 PM
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I'm just wondering if Alice knows we're here from the dull background whisper of our chatting and not-so-dull whisper of the attempted commands.
I do not expect to get Derrick to suspect anything without outright telling him (not recommended for us to do ourselves) nor to make Alice feel at all guilty (though we can try). I am in favor of trying to make the situation seem 'off' to one or both of them.
>Pancakes: Speak
>Syrup drizzled on Alice's pancakes/crêpes: Spell words: "How can what you did be good if you must lie about it?"
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-19-2016, 10:51 PM
if this was a dream, all of the above commands are legitimate
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-20-2016, 09:00 AM
(05-19-2016, 07:32 PM)ForestGardener Wrote: »>Pancakes: Speak
>Syrup drizzled on Alice's pancakes/crêpes: Spell words: "How can what you did be good if you must lie about it?"
Haha, seconding! xD
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-20-2016, 03:10 PM
(05-19-2016, 07:32 PM)ForestGardener Wrote: »>Syrup drizzled on Alice's pancakes/crêpes: Spell words: "How can what you did be good if you must lie about it?"
Wow, that would be amazing if we could do that. If so, I'm all for that command!
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05-20-2016, 08:33 PM
>All of them, but in the order 2,1,3,4 to better follow natural conversation.
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05-21-2016, 09:52 AM
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Derrick: How about, where we went?
Alice: Oh sure... First when we left the hospital we went to the mall.
Alice: We window shopped for a long time before deciding to watch a movie.
Derrick: What movie did we watch?
Alice: Oh, This horror movie, Lights out.
Alice: About this girl made of shadows or pure night or something that only exists in the dark.
Alice: Ohhh man, it was so scary you would have had to pry me off you with a crowbar!
Derrick: Wow, sounds like I would have enjoyed that...
Alice: Aww, it's okay. We can watch it again if you want! On me this time.
Derrick: Ahh it's okay, I'll watch on the internet or something later.
Alice: After the movie we went to McDonald's for burgers, then we went to some dine-in restaurants with waiters and everything. We never ordered a lot so we could keep jumping from place to place.
Alice: After like three different places we decided to go to the park, hung out on the jungle gyms and just talked... Afterwards we went actual shopping.
Alice: We decided to buy each other clothes, but you refused all the cute stuff I wanted to pick!
Alice: So we agreed no more of that if I could pick one outfit for you at least.
Alice: You have lovely taste I should say, the clothes you got for me are stunning.
Derrick: Can I see them?
Alice: Sure~ I'll give you a viewing when you're all up to speed.
Derrick: Okay.
Alice: After shopping I bought some alcohol for us at a place.
Alice: They're really relaxed with their ID checks. Though I always have a fake ID just as a precaution.
Alice: We then went back to the park and drank the whole bottle together!
Derrick: W-wow...
Alice: Yeah, then after "Events" I decided to end the night and took you home. You could barely stand.
Derrick: What did we buy?
Alice: We bought clothes, movies, dinner x3, alcohol, anda, that's pretty much it.
Alice: You'll be seeing the outfits so they'll explain themselves.
Derrick: Okay... How bad was I?
Alice: Oh, you were BAD.
Alice: You were loud, hyper, and carefree.
Alice: I had to chase you a couple times because you kept running off.
Alice: And you took a tumble down some stairs, I hopped on you to prevent you from going further, which hurt a lot by the way!
Derrick: S-sorry...
Alice: You tried singing too, pretty poorly I should note.
Alice: And besides that, you were mostly just an average drunk person.
Derrick: What about you? Did you get drunk?
Alice: Nah, I can hold alcohol really well.
Alice: You could say I have a strong tolerance for it.
Alice: Also, who would get us home if we were both too drunk to think properly?
Derrick: True, hehe...
Derrick: Then what? Any funny moments?
Alice: Well, you barfed.
Derrick: O-oh...
Alice: Yep... luckily you didn't get any on your clothes.
Alice: You also said I was the best person in the whole world, and you were so glad to have me back again.
Derrick: Ha...Haha...
Alice: You also spilled beans that you were in pain from us not being together and you sometimes cried yourself to sleep.
Derrick: WH.. I SAID THAT...??
Alice: Yep!
Alice: Do you?
Derrick: ER...Well...
Derrick: It was a long time ago... I was really lonely, and going through some stuff...
Alice: Ahh, it's okay Brother! It would make sense since you're my other half.
Alice: We need each other like how the earth needs the moon, or how like puppies need love.
Alice: I've... gone through my share of misery from being away from you too, y'know.
Alice: So it's okay.
Alice: Just know that whatever happens in life, you'll always have your sister.
Alice: Always.
Derrick: .... Yeah.
Alice: Now! How about I show off my hot new shit!
Derrick: Okay!
Alice: We'll finish breakfast afterwards, c'mon!
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Alice: Okay, check it!
Derrick: Oooh.
Alice: Stand over there, I'll change into 'em and you tell me which one you like the most, or just thoughts in general. Sound good?
Derrick: Sure!
Alice: Okay, first one...
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Alice: Voila~
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Alice: This would be something I'd wear at home, the sweater is nice and baggy, and with the short shorts, I feel completely unrestricted!
Derrick: Yeah, it looks awesome! Definitely something I'd pick.
Alice: Next!
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Alice: Voila x2!
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Alice: This is a more classy, stylish outside attire, the arm warmer gloves were a nice touch! You even recommended the sexy garter belt as a joke.
Derrick: I did? Haha...
Derrick: My sense of humour sucks...
Alice: It's okay, I think it makes me look gorgeous!
Alice: Next!
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Alice: Voila triple combo~
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Alice: I like this one a lot because it feels home-y AND outside-y! It's pretty and light. And the tights with boyfriend shorts were a great combo.
Alice: You really have good tastes, Brother!
Derrick: Thanks! I like this one a lot too.
Alice: Which one's your favourite?
Derrick: I really like the... Sweater one!
Derrick: Your hair looks cute up like that too.
Alice: Aww, thanks!
Alice: Let's get you into your outfit.
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Derrick: Oh... I have to get into those??
Alice: Yes! Put 'em on.
Derrick: -sigh- Well, okay then.
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Alice: See? You look great!
Alice: Skinny jeans suit you.
Derrick: No... I don't think so, haha.
Derrick: The sweater is nice at least.
Alice: Wear this to school! I'll wear this too.
Derrick: Enn.....
Alice: C'mon, please?? I'm begging you~
Derrick: Fine, okay.
Alice: Yay!
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05-21-2016, 11:25 AM
>Derrick: Don't forget your wallet on your way out, you need to pay Lexii back.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-21-2016, 01:15 PM
(05-21-2016, 11:25 AM)neferiusNexus Wrote: »>Derrick: Don't forget your wallet on your way out, you need to pay Lexii back.
seconding, and adding to
>get some candy or something as an extra thank you, better make sure to pay back when you have classes together.
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-21-2016, 02:00 PM
(05-21-2016, 01:15 PM)Panur Wrote: »>get some candy or something as an extra thank you, better make sure to pay back when you have classes together. It'd be a nice gesture, but where is he going to get that candy? He exactly run off to the store to get some while alice is with him, can he?
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RE: Lucidstuck: It's not over!
05-21-2016, 02:17 PM
Freaking hell, I wish I could just reach inside the comic and strangle alice, just look at this bullshit, not only she's lying and ommiting information, she's now putting words in his mouth to make Derrick believe he said things he didn't, again and again, time after time alice keeps getting away with this shit, she gets to fool her victim, the law, and the consequences. and it just keeps happening.
I also freaking adore how alice keeps talking about Derrick being her other half, and derrick just doesn't find that funny in any way, shape or form, Derrick is as dense as a brick, COME ON MAN GET A GRIP.
Something that worries me is that derrick essentially got amnesia, he doesn't even remember the things that happenend BEFORE starting to drink, hell, does he even remember visiting Emily in the hospital that day?
Also, I've made the observer's oath, just because.
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I shall live and die at my post.
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