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intrepidPioneer · 05-31-2018, 03:55 AM

Derrick: emphasize the fact that they lied to you , that they have been lying to you for who knows how long, which not only hurt you but is making you question if you actually ever knew this person, not to mention the fact that to protect them and their lies you may have ended up hurting and pushing away other people who didn't deserve it

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You want to tell Lucas more, but the thought enrages you.

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Every time you revisit this morning your head becomes cloudy, have you forgotten what today is?

Kooper · 05-31-2018, 04:31 AM

Only one page? Feels peculiar for iP. Usually he updates two or more pages at once...

Seems like there's nothing left to do until Garreth comes back with the waffles. However the "revisit this morning" may or may not be a red herring, so I suggest:

> Derrick: Stop thinking about your sister, distract your mind by talking to Lucas about unrelated stuff of this morning. Negative thoughts may distract you from the task of saving Lucia. You could vent any negative emotions to Garreth later as food for thought.

RemoteCalamity · 05-31-2018, 04:34 AM

>Derrick: Tell Lucas that what you two where talking about just reminded you of something a bit unpleasant, then try to steer the conversation onto something more lighthearted.

also Boo x2

Panur · 05-31-2018, 10:13 AM

>Derrick: if you are this upset suggest you two go help Garry, the least you can do is set he table.

neferiusNexus · 05-31-2018, 07:35 PM

(05-31-2018, 04:31 AM)Kooper Wrote: »Only one page? Feels peculiar for iP. Usually he updates two or more pages at once...

Seems like there's nothing left to do until Garreth comes back with the waffles. However the "revisit this morning" may or may not be a red herring, so I suggest:

> Derrick: Stop thinking about your sister, distract your mind by talking to Lucas about unrelated stuff of this morning. Negative thoughts may distract you from the task of saving Lucia. You could vent any negative emotions to Garreth later as food for thought.

Seconding this.

Also, juggling between this comic, Patreon comissions and his job is taking it's toll on IP. Please be patient there guise. :)

infinityStarlight · 05-31-2018, 07:35 PM

>Derrick: Go join Garreth in the kitchen and help him with the waffles, ask Lucas if he would like to come with you.

CJayoj · 05-31-2018, 08:30 PM

>Derrick: Take a moment to clear your head and focus. Think about Lucia. Today is important. go talk with garreth and he should help

Kooper · 06-01-2018, 02:23 AM

(05-31-2018, 07:35 PM)neferiusNexus Wrote: »Also, juggling between this comic, Patreon comissions and his job is taking it's toll on IP. Please be patient there guise. :)

Wait, what full time job does he have?
Also I wasn't taking about time, but usual conversations are much longer than this posted -- two scenes or a change of scenery. I guess that's open for interpretation.

intrepidPioneer · 06-01-2018, 02:57 AM

Derrick: Stop thinking about your sister, distract your mind by talking to Lucas about unrelated stuff of this morning. Negative thoughts may distract you from the task of saving Lucia. You could vent any negative emotions to Garreth later as food for thought

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Garreth unloads the waffles for the three of you, there's nothing special about them, but it feels quite the opposite.

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Kooper · 06-01-2018, 03:08 AM

I don't think there's anything we can do here, actually; it might be better if we just do a
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until Lucas leaves, so that we can talk to Garry about the hospital visit and advance the plot.
Or if there are people who are itching for content, we can do
> Be Garreth
instead.

ReedRGale · 06-01-2018, 06:36 AM

> Derrick: Ask about the old days

While we're on the topic of conversations between people...

neferiusNexus · 06-01-2018, 09:43 AM

(06-01-2018, 06:36 AM)ReedRGale Wrote: »> Derrick: Ask about the old days

While we're on the topic of conversations between people...

Seconding this at the speed of light!

Also, pancake Alice eat your heart out! ;P

intrepidPioneer · 06-01-2018, 01:49 PM

Derrick: Ask about the old days

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Noo5uke · 06-01-2018, 01:51 PM

>Be Gary so we can talk.

Fellow · 06-01-2018, 01:52 PM

>Start planning how you're going to get into the hospital. Get some coffee ready, too, you can't doze off today.

TerraTorment · 06-01-2018, 01:53 PM

>Derrick: check the time, you dont wanna be losing the track of time today, take inventory of everything you bought to decide what you could use, talk to garry about forging an overnight hospital pass

by taking inventory i mean derrick should take the stuff he bought out of the bag so we can see what we got to work with

ReedRGale · 06-01-2018, 07:06 PM

(06-01-2018, 01:52 PM)Fellow Wrote: »>Start planning how you're going to get into the hospital. Get some coffee ready, too, you can't doze off today.

Seconding this. Time to get on track.

Kooper · 06-02-2018, 02:45 AM

(06-01-2018, 01:51 PM)Noo5uke Wrote: »>Be Gary so we can talk.

I don't think it's a good idea to do that in front of Derrick.

(06-01-2018, 01:51 PM)TerraTorment Wrote: »>Derrick: check the time, you dont wanna be losing the track of time today, take inventory of everything you bought to decide what you could use, talk to garry about forging an overnight hospital pass

by taking inventory i mean derrick should take the stuff he bought out of the bag so we can see what we got to work with

(06-01-2018, 01:51 PM)Fellow Wrote: »>Start planning how you're going to get into the hospital. Get some coffee ready, too, you can't doze off today.

Seconding both of these, but make sure to do TT's command before Fellow's.

quixoticTokki · 06-02-2018, 03:39 AM

(06-01-2018, 01:51 PM)Noo5uke Wrote: »>Be Gary so we can talk.

How about instead,

>Gary: After discussing plans with Derrick, excuse yourself to the restroom for a few minutes so we can talk.

So we can talk to him alone/not in front of Derrick.

neferiusNexus · 06-02-2018, 09:22 PM

(06-01-2018, 01:52 PM)Fellow Wrote: »>Start planning how you're going to get into the hospital. Get some coffee ready, too, you can't doze off today.

Seconding!

intrepidPioneer · 06-03-2018, 02:39 AM

Derrick: Start planning how you're going to get into the hospital. Get some coffee ready, too, you can't doze off today

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You begin to feel anxious, you're not sure what's going to happen tonight.

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1. Come up with your own plan.
2. Follow Garry's plan.

Panur · 06-03-2018, 02:45 AM

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> Derrick: tell Garry you're anxious about the whole thing and would feel better if you could could talk a bit more about it, and brainstorm some backup plans in case this one fails.

Heyoceama · 06-03-2018, 02:54 AM

> Flesh out the plan a bit more on the way there.

We can probably jump to Emily while they walk and get her filled in. Whatever the case though, we should get moving ASAP.

ReedRGale · 06-03-2018, 03:32 AM

> Derrick: Agree that this should be the main plan, but get Emily's take on it as well and perhaps try to come up with alternatives in case this fails.

Kooper · 06-03-2018, 04:34 AM

(06-03-2018, 02:54 AM)Heyoceama Wrote: »> Flesh out the plan a bit more on the way there.

We can probably jump to Emily while they walk and get her filled in. Whatever the case though, we should get moving ASAP.

Seconding this, but we should stop putting sequential commands since it's unpredictable whether iP will pull a Houdini on us like today. So change this into:
> Derrick: Take inventory; show to Garreth what you bought from the store. Both: Flesh out the plan a bit more on the way there.