RE: MURDERFIA: D1 LET'S DO THIS (66/67)
03-27-2013, 10:56 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-27-2013, 10:59 AM by 0_o.)
Teh, belated comments for the story since I just woke up:
-beginning (before names of suitors were mentioned) was pretty good
-middles (didn't like the fact that we were all just lining up and doing random poop one by one) like a B-
-end - I like the ending sentence
GRANOLA
DID YOU READ WHAT I JUST SAID
-beginning (before names of suitors were mentioned) was pretty good
-middles (didn't like the fact that we were all just lining up and doing random poop one by one) like a B-
-end - I like the ending sentence
GRANOLA
DID YOU READ WHAT I JUST SAID