RE: Lucidstuck II
07-17-2018, 03:17 AM
HOLD IT!
We ran into an inconstancy in our story with Panur's suggestion.
If we found out about Lucia's hospitalization during the visit with Emily, then how could we bring a gift?
If we want this story to work, we have to somehow find a way to explain knowing about Lucia before visiting Emily the first time. I think we HAVE to tell Lucia's mom about Alice's lie if we want to go this route.
Otherwise we could say that we were overcome with grief and couldn't bring ourselves to see Lucia until now?
We ran into an inconstancy in our story with Panur's suggestion.
If we found out about Lucia's hospitalization during the visit with Emily, then how could we bring a gift?
If we want this story to work, we have to somehow find a way to explain knowing about Lucia before visiting Emily the first time. I think we HAVE to tell Lucia's mom about Alice's lie if we want to go this route.
Otherwise we could say that we were overcome with grief and couldn't bring ourselves to see Lucia until now?