Swamped Talk

I write scene-to-scene, and what I generally do is try to make the characters within a scene distinct from each other. That tends to make them stand out from the cast as a whole. The rest is just trying to keep them in-character.

I've noticed that since we've introduced Corvus, Marshal has started to become a little more...whiny. I suppose it gives him a lot of room to grow as a character. Not sure how much of a "coming of age" aspect there will be to his story.

it's not considered unusual in any way that Marshall has two fathers, for instance.

Actually, this has never been asked or addressed in the adventure, but does Marshal have a biological mother?