RE: The Tower
09-11-2016, 02:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-12-2016, 08:49 PM by smuchmuch.)
(While this adventure looks nice, may I venture a small art critique ?
While I understand the use of templates to gain time, particulary if you have loads of characters, may I advise that you try to diversify the poses a little more, even the 'iddle' ones ?
I think the knight is like the first character whose legs are in a slightly different position than "feet turned inward, standing on the tip like a ballerina." By comparaison, it's very obvious when you look at say, the alchemist and the gunslinger side by side, that they are the same basic templte.
Now I know it's not a huge thing but with a stylized art style, pose is abut as important as anything else to convey personality and attitude.)
>Might as well check on these two while you're in the room.
While I understand the use of templates to gain time, particulary if you have loads of characters, may I advise that you try to diversify the poses a little more, even the 'iddle' ones ?
I think the knight is like the first character whose legs are in a slightly different position than "feet turned inward, standing on the tip like a ballerina." By comparaison, it's very obvious when you look at say, the alchemist and the gunslinger side by side, that they are the same basic templte.
Now I know it's not a huge thing but with a stylized art style, pose is abut as important as anything else to convey personality and attitude.)
>Might as well check on these two while you're in the room.