[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

hey!! my friend Artem1s very kindly sent me a +1 species submission ticket, so i've just gone ahead and submitted it along with their planet—i hope that's okay!! i'm proud of them, and i hope you'll like them ♡

here's my species link: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...es/gong-an

(within the body of the large text blocks, all the quotes in "" marks were initially italicised! i'd love it if those could be readded.)

and here's my planet link: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissions/zygote

thanks again!

ALL APPLICATION ARE NOW CLOSED

If you submit any applications that are not artwork or requests please know you might lose any info you submit as new applications will be deleted quickly.

As always +1 tickets can get around closings.

Fauna and legendary apps are now open

Here to claim my scralion babs! https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...a/scralion

I shall claim the lampies
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi.../lampbeast

I have created Rocks. They do not have ten legs. You do not see them moving.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissionsfauna/rocks

I mess up the subspecies, which is supposed to be: "There are many different types of rock. Take a moment to remind yourself you do not see the rocks moving."

Gah! I made his name too long. Perhaps Azul Ff or just Azul is fine.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...lfeatherfa

Gah! I made his name too long. Perhaps Azul Ff or just Azul is fine.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...lfeatherfa

Very interesting character, mailmen are always good. Can I ask why people often assume he’s an aftik, given his very different appearance?



Minor notice, but he’s “seen multiple times” twice at the end of one sentence.

Gah! I made his name too long. Perhaps Azul Ff or just Azul is fine.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...lfeatherfa

Very interesting character, mailmen are always good. Can I ask why people often assume he’s an aftik, given his very different appearance?



Minor notice, but he’s “seen multiple times” twice at the end of one sentence.

Oopsie daisy. I worked on it on a mobile device. I can't expand the boxes.

Azul looks like the guy in my avatar. He looks almost like an aftik to me. They share many features, and I thought, hey they look a lot like aftiks.

Claiming the mischievous poppin fauna, noticed a mistake in the entry where two of the trivia lines do not end in full stops but besides that it looks good. https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissionsfauna/poppin

Laying claim to the Ferro.
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissionsfauna/ferro

Faunas cleared out. Quite a few got rejected for easy to fix reasons. Feel free to resubmit.

Fixed rock to be singular Rock
Fixed int on Ferros + removed all "you"'s besides the two in the quote hopefully those are fine.
Ferro

UUGH I fixed it and as soon as I pressed “submit” my battery ran out and it’ll take ages to rewrite againnnnn why

Here to claim ma boi (girl actually but whatever) https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/x-251

Ayy! Got myself a thing here! Might wanna take a look at it? =3
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/raith

Although, I am questioning this one... Who knows, maybe it'll work.

Wait... did my thing not send? I can't see it soooo... Hold on.

Nope! It did not for some reason! Here's the link for Raith... again...
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/raith

Nope! It did not for some reason! Here's the link for Raith... again...
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/raith

I love Raith very much and want to hug her

Nope! It did not for some reason! Here's the link for Raith... again...
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/raith

I love Raith very much and want to hug her

Really? Cause most people look at her and kind of just, "give up" if that makes any sense.

I'm glad you like her though. =3

Nope! It did not for some reason! Here's the link for Raith... again...
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dary/raith

I love Raith very much and want to hug her

Really? Cause most people look at her and kind of just, "give up" if that makes any sense.

I'm glad you like her though. =3

I want to give her a year’s supply of chocolate so she’ll be happy for a whole year

Made some adjustments:
https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...ndary/azul

Crapdoodle-doo. I pasted the wrong text in the wrong box. Here's what Behavior was supporsed to say:

Azul is always on the move. He generally just stops by to rest. He won't generally be seen in one place in some time. One of the notable features of his behavior is how quickly he can disappear, like in a puff of thin air. Just have him turn in some corner or go through some door, and he's gone.

The trait that Azul is most famous for is his propensity to deliver mail to any person in the universe without fail. Have him deliver mail, and expect the recipient to receive the mail within a week no matter the distance. He is speculated to cruise around the universe in a currently unknown ship, but it has never been recorded nor documented to exist. His ship is invisible to all known sensors. His sudden appearances on planets without suitable landing sites and space ports complicates this matter.

Usually, Azul delivers mail from a verifiable and definite source, they can come from mysterious senders that are hard to trace. They're often curious items. When receivers of such item ask who sent them, he would state their name if he knew, otherwise, he would just say "a mysterious sender."

Personal accounts of speaking with Azul are sparse and scarce. He's a man of few words. If one were to strike a conversation with him, they're usually only a few exchanges long. One only has ample time to speak with him before he decides to disappear not to be seen again for some time.

There are also special occasions where Azul may approach a stranger to test his ice cream creations.

Cageur the Notail Killer has been submitted!

https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...eurim-tril

Due to space constraints, I'd like to request his second name be changed to Im-Trillions, or (if there's no working around the character limit) Im-Slew would also be great.

E: Also! Can the [Abomination] trait's alt text be changed to "You can rest when they're dead."?

Claiming the dermichiti.

https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissi...dermichiti

Everything after the line "The key feature of the dermichiti" in the physical description was supposed to be a separate paragraph.

Crap! I messed up on the diet thing! It should just be Meat and Insects!

But in any case... Here's the Motx!

https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/submissionsfauna/motx