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Now this is the story all about how my life got flipped turned upside down and i'd like to take a minute just sit right there, I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town called LOMAM.

In west canada born and raised, on my house where I spent most of my days, chilling out maxin', relaxin' all cool and reading books with Lucia, when my sister who was up to no good started making trouble in my lively hood, they got in one little fight and my sister got scared, she said "we are going out on a date"

I begged and pleaded with her day after day
But she had me dress up and we went on our way
She gave me some bottle and then she dared me to down it.
I got my booze on and said, 'I might as well drink it!'.

First time, yo this is bad
Drinking vodka straight out of the glass.
Is this what being drunk is like?
Hmm this might be alright.

But wait I feel dizzy, lightheaded, all that
Is this the type of thing people use to kidnap children?
I don't think so
I'll see when I get home
I hope my sister prepares something tasty for dinner!

Well, we got home and I was almost passed out
There was a girl who looked like my sister trying to get me to bed.
I ain't gonna go to sleep yet
I just got here
she laid me down on the bed to take care of me or something, and suddenly the lights disappeared!

I woke up and a reaper on a car came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it' - 'Yo, home to LOMAM!"

I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the reaper 'Yo home smell ya later'
I looked at my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of LOMAM

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I'm not proud of myself for making this, i'm gonna go cry myself to sleep now.

Dang TT, dat's Poetry :o ...the poem was phresh as hell too ^^

Keep that up and people going by your avatars will think you're both Lesbian Lovers ...which would be pretty hilarious tbh xD

Face X iP otp?

Been trying to get people on my side of loving him forever now <3
Beta (iP) is my bae, and makes me kokoro go doki doki, but senpai wont notice me

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Clearly, this is the only ship worth shipping.
Also dat double post tho sorri ;c

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You get out of bed and succumb to a wave of disorientation. You feel light headed, and really, really sore in your hips. You hope you didn't fall down stairs or something...



You head over to your dream journal to write up a log but... You're really drawing a blank here. You have no idea what happened last night.



These clothes look brand new, certainly not your tastes in pants, but the hoodie is pretty cool. You must have went shopping and bought these with Alice.



You decide to head downstairs for breakfast, maybe get your sister to jog your memory.

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Alice: Oh! Uhh.. Good morning brother!
Alice: I was just about to get you for breakfast... How are you feeling?
Alice: You were... quite something last night, haha. Who knew alcohol could do THAT to you!
Derrick: ........

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Derrick: What happened last night, Sister?
Alice: Oh, don't worry, we can talk about it when we get downstairs.
Derrick: Okay.
Alice: You might be a little sore, or have bruising on your arms and chest.
Alice: Don't worry about those, you fell a couple times in your drunkenness. I had to restrain you from flailing about as well.
Alice: I took good care of you... That's how you got here.
Alice: You're really light! You should let me make all of your meals for you.
Alice: I can fix that right up.
Derrick: .... I don't know, I don't want to burden you--
Alice: Nonsense! I insist.
Alice: Come! Breakfast awaits.

>Derrick: Wait one second, you should check your dream journal really quick JUST IN CASE.

https://i.imgur.com/ED5PAfO.png It's been awhile so somebody correct me if I'm wrong, but is the PE supposed to be out of his poster in the waking world?

https://i.imgur.com/ED5PAfO.png It's been awhile so somebody correct me if I'm wrong, but is the PE supposed to be out of his poster in the waking world?

https://mspfanventures.com/?s=3039&p=79

This is the first time Derrick wakes up after UE escapes from the poster, on the waking world, it's still there, this was an oversight by IP EDIT: it's fixed now

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look at her face, look how pleased she must be feeling with herself

soon, soon enough you'll feel the weight of the sins crawling on your back, one day Derrick will be free from you.

I feel so sorry for him, he has no idea what happened and it's not like we can tell him =( Even if we did tell him, he wouldn't believe us...

She looks so pleased.
Kinda like how i was when i read it.

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Clearly, this is the only ship worth shipping.
Also dat double post tho sorri ;c

I ship them too, but PLATONICALLY ...which is clearly not the case anymore unfortunately >.>

Also, the Mikuru hairpin was a hilariously nice touch! xD

I feel so sorry for him, he has no idea what happened and it's not like we can tell him =( Even if we did tell him, he wouldn't believe us...

While we can't turn back time for logistical reasons, we still have to put as much moral weight on the situation as possible.

>Derrick: Mention how you can barely walk because of the pain in your hips and say you're sorry if you acted inappropriate while you were drunk.

>Alice: Can you feel your sins crawling on your back? Succumbing to your own selfish urges has left Derrick in pain. You have failed at your promise to protect him. You failed to protect him from yourself.

>Alice: You feel your sins crawling on your back. Succumbing to your own selfish urges has left Derrick in pain. You have failed at your promise to protect him. You failed to protect him from yourself.

This command doesn't seem like it'd do anything but piss off Alice.

This command doesn't seem like it'd do anything but piss off Alice.

That's right, i want her to be ANGRY with herself ...also, she can't hear us if i remember correctly, only Daydream can.

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...ok, no, that's wrong, my memory's been on the fritz lately >.>

I'll just rephrase the command part as a question, since i still want her to feel SOME guilt.

I think we might've been wrong about the princess. We've coddled her too much and she felt no remorse in doing what she did.
Normally, the threat of somebody watching you should be enough to deter criminals from carrying out their crimes, but that is obviously wrong as Alice just doesn't care :I

That's right, i want her to be ANGRY with herself ...also, she can't hear us if i remember correctly, only Daydream can.

Err, we spent half the sleepover talking to Alice? If you think that was Daydream for some reason, there's still that time we named Alice.

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I'll just rephrase the command part as a question, since i still want her to feel SOME guilt.

Will phrasing things as a question migitate the "get Alice angry at us" aspect at all?

Doubledit:
If Alice doesn't know we know, we could pretend Derrick knows when it would be to our advantage.

I think we might've been wrong about the princess. We've coddled her too much and she felt no remorse in doing what she did.
Normally, the threat of somebody watching you should be enough to deter criminals from carrying out their crimes, but that is obviously wrong as Alice just doesn't care. :I

The more I think about it, the more that sentence (being wrong about the princess) confuses me, if by princess nightmare meant Alice, then i'm not quite sure what we could be wrong about her, sure, there's still things about her we don't know, like what she's written on her diary, what she has on ther closet, how did her sweater get ruptured, etc, etc. But I think her selfish intentions and goals are very clear, keep Derrick all to herself.

Alice is a spoiled child, she always gets what she wants, without any care about other's well being, even the one she loves, if she keeps going the way she is now... she's gonna have a bad time.

>Alice: Can you feel your sins crawling on your back? Succumbing to your own selfish urges has left Derrick in pain. You have failed at your promise to protect him. You failed to protect him from yourself.

I reccomend not letting Alice know we know what she did, let's build some trust with her, and when she least expects it, have her sins bite her in the ass, I would like to motion to strike this command.

I reccomend not letting Alice know we know what she did, let's build some trust with her, and when she least expects it, have her sins bite her in the ass, I would like to motion to strike this command.

Yeah, same NN, remember how long it took us just to get Alice to cooperate? pissing her off at us would serve literally no purpose beyond being vaguely satisfying morally.... "game" wise it'll just provably make things more difficult to us.

...wtf did Alice do to him that derrick thinks he may have fallen down several times.... >_<

I'm back to my old commands

>Derrick: check your journal to make sure this is not a dream. If it's not, consider a shower to help feel better before breakfast.

Yeah, same NN, remember how long it took us just to get Alice to cooperate? pissing her off at us would serve literally no purpose beyond being vaguely satisfying morally.... "game" wise it'll just provably make things more difficult to us.

I'm just... tired of trying to tiptoe around Alice at this point. As for if she'll be more cooperative if she thinks we ar in the dark and as-usual she can get away with anything she sets her mind to? I highly doubt it.

Will we somehow earn her respect if we keep playing the dumb fool or try to corce her with vague threats we never make good on? Absolutely not.

How many billions of iterations did it take Daydream to finally realize that her actions have far-reaching consequences? And even then she was not willing to actually reconsider her position until someone confronted her directly (thank God for Emily)

The way i see it, right-now Alice is still at a moment in time where she is still unsure about the consequences. She is still riding off the high of getting away with what she did. She needs to be brought down to earth.

If anyone else knows of a more tactful way we can word Alice's chastisement, please let me know.

Keeping quiet about someone's misdeeds never solves anything. Please keep that in mind.

I know that as human beings our minds can be prone to shutting down for our own protection when faced with insurmountable evil, but for the sake of the characters of this story which we are so invested in, we need to be strong, and we need to behave more firmly in our interaction with Alice.

Yeah, same NN, remember how long it took us just to get Alice to cooperate? pissing her off at us would serve literally no purpose beyond being vaguely satisfying morally.... "game" wise it'll just provably make things more difficult to us.

I'm just... tired of trying to tiptoe around Alice at this point. As for if she'll be more cooperative if she thinks we ar in the dark and as-usual she can get away with anything she sets her mind to? I highly doubt it.

Will we somehow earn her respect if we keep playing the dumb fool or try to corce her with vague threats we never make good on? Absolutely not.

How many billions of iterations did it take Daydream to finally realize that her actions have far-reaching consequences? And even then she was not willing to actually reconsider her position until someone confronted her directly (thank God for Emily)

The way i see it, right-now Alice is still at a moment in time where she is still unsure about the consequences. She is still riding off the high of getting away with what she did. She needs to be brought down to earth.

If anyone else knows of a more tactful way we can word Alice's chastisement, please let me know.

Keeping quiet about someone's misdeeds never solves anything. Please keep that in mind.

I know that as human beings our minds can be prone to shutting down for our own protection when faced with insurmountable evil, but for the sake of the characters of this story which we are so invested in, we need to be strong, and we need to behave more firmly in our interaction with Alice.

we already talked about this, but you have as much a right to command what you feel like as anyone else, but I just hope voting down commands is still a thing... I'm voting against this one.

I'm just... tired of trying to tiptoe around Alice at this point. As for if she'll be more cooperative if she thinks we ar in the dark and as-usual she can get away with anything she sets her mind to? I highly doubt it.

ah alas i cannot provide much input as i am currently on mobile, but i have to include my input that trying to make herfeel guilty is a bad idea. whats done is done, dont bring it up, and move forward. dwelling on it will cause you to faulter.

I'm just... tired of trying to tiptoe around Alice at this point. As for if she'll be more cooperative if she thinks we ar in the dark and as-usual she can get away with anything she sets her mind to? I highly doubt it.

Will we somehow earn her respect if we keep playing the dumb fool or try to corce her with vague threats we never make good on? Absolutely not.

How many billions of iterations did it take Daydream to finally realize that her actions have far-reaching consequences? And even then she was not willing to actually reconsider her position until someone confronted her directly (thank God for Emily)

The way i see it, right-now Alice is still at a moment in time where she is still unsure about the consequences. She is still riding off the high of getting away with what she did. She needs to be brought down to earth.

If anyone else knows of a more tactful way we can word Alice's chastisement, please let me know.

Keeping quiet about someone's misdeeds never solves anything. Please keep that in mind.

I know that as human beings our minds can be prone to shutting down for our own protection when faced with insurmountable evil, but for the sake of the characters of this story which we are so invested in, we need to be strong, and we need to behave more firmly in our interaction with Alice.

tiptoeing around with alice is exactly what we should do, don't get too trigger happy just now, think about this in the long run, pissing her off right now will just make her cooperate less.

Also, think about this, this is Alice, not Daydream, Alice is not in DD's situation she's not stuck in an event horizon desperate to find a way to save her brother, Emily could make her see the error of her ways by making her put the well being of Derrick above all else, it took her around 8799 iterations of the construct to realize that, this alice doesn't know any better.

Trust us on this ok, In time Alice will realize what she did was wrong, and we could do so in various ways, like maybe making derrick feel bad?, then alice will feel guilty.

>Derrick: Whatever it was that happened last night, you don't want to do it ever again.

TT, I think it was Narren who said she had been through 8799 iterations... the last time she counted. I also seem to recall Daydream saying the reapers arrived in the construct recently. Which just makes your point stronger.

TT, I think it was Narren who said she had been through 8799 iterations... the last time she counted. I also seem to recall Daydream saying the reapers arrived in the construct recently.

So one could likely actually say...

that the number of iterations...



is...




over...

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>Derrick: Whatever it was that happened last night, you don't want to do it ever again.

TT, I think it was Narren who said she had been through 8799 iterations... the last time she counted. I also seem to recall Daydream saying the reapers arrived in the construct recently. Which just makes your point stronger.

Yeap! I just added the link to their conversation on the Wiki under Time Shenanigans :)

That penultimate picture: how can someone be so cute and so creepy at the same time?!
Yeah, I vote we stealthily guilt trip Alice by having Derrick repeatedly mention how much pain he's in. Otherwise let's not directly talk to her just yet.

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Clearly, this is the only ship worth shipping.
Also dat double post tho sorri ;c

I ship them too, but PLATONICALLY ...which is clearly not the case anymore unfortunately >.>

Also, the Mikuru hairpin was a hilariously nice touch! xD

I feel so sorry for him, he has no idea what happened and it's not like we can tell him =( Even if we did tell him, he wouldn't believe us...

While we can't turn back time for logistical reasons, we still have to put as much moral weight on the situation as possible.

>Derrick: Mention how you can barely walk because of the pain in your hips and say you're sorry if you acted inappropriate while you were drunk.

>Alice: Can you feel your sins crawling on your back? Succumbing to your own selfish urges has left Derrick in pain. You have failed at your promise to protect him. You failed to protect him from yourself.

Ehh, I don't really think that it's a good idea NOW, nN. I'm not saying that we can't do it EVER, but I don't think doing it at this point will have any productive impact. I also don't think there's any point to applying punishment to a being that's not going to exist for much longer. She disappears after the construct ends and/or Daydream doesn't need her anymore, after all.

Besides, if we want to make her feel bad/scared I think it'd be better to have Derrick express his feelings a bit more. Make him pour out his soul apologetically like HE did something bad, say something about how he's so morally against things like what she did, and then thank her as if she had done him a favor. And THEN we lay into her. Not anything wordy, because that kind of diminishes the impact, but if we can do something cryptic like "we know what you did, and Derrick can know too." I think it'd put the fear of us into her.

Of course, that's assuming we WANT her to fear us right now. I don't think there's really much of a point to do it right now, since she's said that if we give her commands she'll basically follow through with them for now, we just haven't done that yet. I think it'd be better leverage once she thinks she's exerting control of a situation, especially socially, to throw her off her game. And at this moment we wouldn't be getting any of that.

EDIT: Changed language because of lower post.