RE: Webcomic Deer Rectory
05-27-2013, 10:55 PM
I have a lot of the same hesitations as the last time Paz like she was potentially going to become a plot point, but to a lesser extent and with all of the timing issues removed. I still feel like it's a little forced, but am giving it the benefit of the doubt for now. Probably because Paz is criminally adorable, and also because I suspect I might be murdered if I expressed discontent with the storyline.
It could be cute and interesting and add to the story! I suspect that ultimately it will not be much of anything but cute and will either be kind of a drag pacingwise in the midst of other larger plotlines coming together or get shelved unnaturally. I could well be proven wrong, as Siddell has proven himself a pretty able character-writer, but... I dunno, it still feels tacked on, and potentially a vehicle for a predictable jealousy plot with Annie. I look forward to eating my words, but I would currently best describe myself as "cautiously hopeful but hesitant".
How contradictory of me!
It could be cute and interesting and add to the story! I suspect that ultimately it will not be much of anything but cute and will either be kind of a drag pacingwise in the midst of other larger plotlines coming together or get shelved unnaturally. I could well be proven wrong, as Siddell has proven himself a pretty able character-writer, but... I dunno, it still feels tacked on, and potentially a vehicle for a predictable jealousy plot with Annie. I look forward to eating my words, but I would currently best describe myself as "cautiously hopeful but hesitant".
How contradictory of me!