RE: Incident [TEXT]
05-15-2013, 05:27 PM
Not an update, sorry. Just something I forgot to tag on the end of the last one.
I love long suggestions! Seeing people getting invested in something that I made is a great feeling (especially when said thing is a text adventure that's statistically doomed on that merit alone) so yeah, write as much as you want. Reader input is awesome. I might not use it all, but most suggestions influence the updates in one way or another even if they don't get explicitly used.
(In unrelated stuff I'm aware that I kind of fumbled the whole 'protagonist's mother is the Red Queen' detail. It wasn't meant to be a twist or anything, but it wasn't intended to be completely obvious either (mostly because it is obvious to the protagonist, so they wouldn't think about it too much) and shoehorning it into a throwaway comment probably wasn't the best way to go about it. But it's out there now, so I guess all I can do is try better next time.)
(05-06-2013, 03:58 AM)btp Wrote: »Sorry, are these suggestions too long? I can keep it brief it that's better! Either way I really enjoy this story - it gets me thinking!
I love long suggestions! Seeing people getting invested in something that I made is a great feeling (especially when said thing is a text adventure that's statistically doomed on that merit alone) so yeah, write as much as you want. Reader input is awesome. I might not use it all, but most suggestions influence the updates in one way or another even if they don't get explicitly used.
(In unrelated stuff I'm aware that I kind of fumbled the whole 'protagonist's mother is the Red Queen' detail. It wasn't meant to be a twist or anything, but it wasn't intended to be completely obvious either (mostly because it is obvious to the protagonist, so they wouldn't think about it too much) and shoehorning it into a throwaway comment probably wasn't the best way to go about it. But it's out there now, so I guess all I can do is try better next time.)