Re: The Grand Battle [Round 3! Killville!]
09-12-2009, 01:39 AM
Originally posted on MSPA by bobthepen.
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Spoiler1. Draykon - Draykon's passages have strong style and good character development. My only complaint is that I'd wish he'd post more.
2. Dragon Fogel - Dragon Fogel posts frequently and almost always has something plot relevant and highly entertaining. His passages seem to be fragmented at times, with each paragraph only having a few sentences.
3 & 4 Aryogaton - Pretty good all around, but this round his passages haven't been very entertaining or plot driving.
3 & 4 Dexexe1234 - Dex does an excellent job of making monsters, and Lutherion is right up there with Eximo as far as favorite characters are concerned. His grammar and writing style could still use improvement, but it has improved drastically from the first round.
5. OddGuy - OddGuy's started the round fairly weak, but his recent posts have shown a drastic improvement towards plot and character development.
6. Pawn2D4 - Pawn2D4's posts have been consistent, but mediocre.
2. Dragon Fogel - Dragon Fogel posts frequently and almost always has something plot relevant and highly entertaining. His passages seem to be fragmented at times, with each paragraph only having a few sentences.
3 & 4 Aryogaton - Pretty good all around, but this round his passages haven't been very entertaining or plot driving.
3 & 4 Dexexe1234 - Dex does an excellent job of making monsters, and Lutherion is right up there with Eximo as far as favorite characters are concerned. His grammar and writing style could still use improvement, but it has improved drastically from the first round.
5. OddGuy - OddGuy's started the round fairly weak, but his recent posts have shown a drastic improvement towards plot and character development.
6. Pawn2D4 - Pawn2D4's posts have been consistent, but mediocre.
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SpoilerReally, I think it's a toss up between OddGuy and Pawn2D4. I really like what everyone has done so far. It's gotten to the point where I feel bad saying a particular player is doing the worst because I've really enjoyed everyone. Plot wise, between Emily and Nathan, either one dying could have good story related consequences. I think the discussion on who should move on should remain focused on style and post quality. Though, personally I like Nathan more than Emily as a character, especially now that he's starting to spiral into madness, but that's just me.