The Grand Battle [Game Over!]

Originally posted on MSPA by cyber95.

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Oh, dexexe? I've seen the criticisms of your writing style, and I have just one thing to say: They're supposed to describe the thoughts of a brain-damaged madman, for frack's sake. They are well-written for the most part, and a slight lack of punctuation is appropriate for the character.

Well, it's not being written by Lutherion himself, that's the thing. It's written from a third person perspective. If it were first person, then maybe it would be kind of appropriate, but you are supposed to be using proper writing in this game.

If you're writing about a brain damaged madman yourself, do you use less punctuation because of what the subject is?

Plus, Dex isn't going for Stylistic Suck, the way he writes is just how he usually writes, it seems.



I keep hovering over the delete button because I feel bad whenever I point out flaws. [img]images/smilies/icon_sad.gif[/img]