The Grand Battle [Game Over!]

Originally posted on MSPA by cyber95.

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I'm back, and I'm going to use this opportunity to start the poll. I'll put up two people for elimination per round (unless there are like, three people that I can't decide between, but I'll try to narrow it down to two).
Gameplay will continue as normal, even as the poll runs.

As many of you have predicted, Lutherion Maw is in danger of being eliminated. This was kind of an upsetting choice for me to make, because dex's posts were always fun to read, and Lutherion is such a fun and crazy character. Unfortunately, the lack of punctuation and such makes it look less like it was written to be a story, and more like it was written to be for, well, a forum. So, that's option one.

Second up is Dorukomets. This choice doesn't have much to do with writing, but activity. almost-there hasn't been posting much at all, and as such, Dorukomets isn't really in this story. He's made cameo appearances, but we don't want to have a character that doesn't do anything. The beginning of the game is a place to get rid of people who don't update, so that there's a good flow of story from everybody. I would have liked to be able to give a better analysis of your writing, almost, but your posts have been both few in number, and very short.

Oddguy's posts also haven't been all that great in number, but there are more than almost-there's, and his latest story section was of a fairly okay length to judge some writing skills, so Nathan isn't on the poll.

Do these choices seem fair?

(revoting is enabled in case you find either player redeems themselves after you've voted them out)