The Spectacular Exhibition (S3G2) [Round 2: Space - Abridged]

Originally posted on MSPA by cyber95.

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Riou, your character doesn't particularly seem suited to this sort of thing. It seems to me like the profile was written with combat and only combat in mind, but this is about character, and yours just doesn't seem like he'd be too interesting in this situation. I'm not sure if you know what this is about, but it's not so much actually about the fighting as it is about the characterization and interaction. You may want to take this into account and try tweaking it a bit.