Potched Kumquat [Victory!]

Originally posted on MSPA by Lap Otter.

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"Holy fucking shit, Yume, be more fucking careful!" Niko shouted, hands clenched into nervous fists. "You don't know how to fight, you're gonna get yourself hurt!"

"Even if Yume is injured, the corporeal body will be fine once she changes out of it," Lissa advised.

"Niko's not worried about the body, Lissa," Lainey said. "She'll be fine, Niko. She's got good instincts and sharp claws."

Niko gritted her teeth. "She'd better be."

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SpoilerMalkyTop (and everyone else, too, I guess), I'd appreciate it if the non-corporeal Voices (Lissa, Lainey, and Niko, at the moment) were controlled only by me. I figure these posts ought to be mostly in third-person-limited from the perspective of the character doing the posting, and none of the non-corporeal Voices' conversation or action is ever perceptible by anyone but the corporeal Voice (hence the italics and past-tense separating it from the corporeal action in normal font and present tense). That doesn't mean I condemn your first use of Lissa; you did well, actually. I'd just appreciate it if you only hijacked the corporeal form from now on.