Re: Intense Struggle! (Round 1 - The Abandoned Base)
02-07-2010, 12:59 PM
Originally posted on MSPA by The Dr..
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SpoilerTo be honest I'm dreadfully aware that I'm probably not going to make it to Round 2 - and even if I do, not to Round 3. I'm not a very dedicated writer and I'm not entirely sure if I can write out one of those giant paragraphs (kinda like Aryo's post in GBI just was) and manage to keep it relatively interesting.
The worst part about it though is that I try and make Trickster's thoughts during battle as short as possible, to imply that his thoughts are becoming a blur, and, therefore, a lot of his decisions aren't the most thought-out and cohesive.
I don't know why I just randomly launched into that. I guess I was getting off topic, which refers back to the part where I said that I have problems keeping interesting things going on. But maybe a little offtopic is good sometimes, because in a sense it helps explain not only how the character feels but also about how the writer themself feels. Maybe I'm just overanalyzing my own writing...?
Holy shit, I just wrote the same length of one of my usual posts explaining why they suck. Maybe I should do this more, that was extremely easy to write.
The worst part about it though is that I try and make Trickster's thoughts during battle as short as possible, to imply that his thoughts are becoming a blur, and, therefore, a lot of his decisions aren't the most thought-out and cohesive.
I don't know why I just randomly launched into that. I guess I was getting off topic, which refers back to the part where I said that I have problems keeping interesting things going on. But maybe a little offtopic is good sometimes, because in a sense it helps explain not only how the character feels but also about how the writer themself feels. Maybe I'm just overanalyzing my own writing...?
Holy shit, I just wrote the same length of one of my usual posts explaining why they suck. Maybe I should do this more, that was extremely easy to write.