RWC Humiliation Station 2011 (HERE COMES THE DEBT COLLECTOR)

RWC Humiliation Station 2011 (HERE COMES THE DEBT COLLECTOR)
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Re: RWC Humiliation Station 2011 (HERE COMES THE DEBT COLLEC
A man once had a business and a life,
A wife, a dog, a house, a picket fence.
but in futility enveloped, thence
he never noticed that he long since died.

Every day he took the bus to town,
(the car just wouldn't start at his behest)
his colleagues had ignored him like a pest,
their impoliteness always brought him down.

But once upon a time a man said hi.
"I think I am invisible," he said.
The man just sighed, and whispered "so do I."

"No surprise, the businessman is always living dead."
The man then realised his neverending lie.
He only lived because of his pretense.

I am pretty sure minimalism and comedy are direct opposites, but HERE IT IS :OOOOOO
I was gonna do a sonnet chain but then I read "the fifteenth sonnet may only have lines you already wrote in the other ones and they still have to rhyme" and I was all nooooooooooope
quidquid Latine dictum sit altum videtur.
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Re: RWC Humiliation Station 2011 (HERE COMES THE DEBT COLLEC - by Woffles - 11-24-2011, 08:55 PM