RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
01-21-2019, 09:14 PM
Grammatical or such errors:
Command errors:
Visual errors:
During the transition to the redux something was lost and now things don't make sense errors:
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/17-1
Error: "and you can get one if you want, if you want,"
Correction: Just eliminate the second "if you want"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/40
Error(?): "How good or bad these planets are, and two rounds of dice rolls determine how much you know about them off the bat."
Correction(?): I just don't really understand how the quality of the planets impacts how much you know about them, so maybe cut "How good or bad these planets are, and" out, or be more clear. It might just be me not understanding it though.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/45
Error: "your crew doesn’t think your choice on this matter wasn’t as stupid as I think it is"
Correction: Change wasn't to was
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/49-1
Error: "Rodney tapped hers jaw"
Correction: Hers -> her
Note: This only occurs, as far as I'm aware, if you give Rodney female pronouns and don't choose the traits for Rodney yourself.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/76-1
Error: "they didn't notice him he slinked"
Correction: Put "as" between him and he
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/177
Error: "Why don't you tell new crew"
Correction: Put "the" between tell and new
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/286
Error: "join me for a spot of lunch now? 888₤"
Correction: Add a period after 888₤ I guess, though it really isn't a sentence at all.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/735
Error: "If this plece"
Correction: piece instead of plece
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/743
Error: "Too shamed to fight"
Correction: Ashamed instead of shamed
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/768
Error: "Cobalt looked around Cobalt's pockets"
Correction: Maybe replace Cobalt's with whatever the entered pronoun is, also maybe use through instead of around. This really just makes the sentence flow better in my opinion though.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/791
Error: "now that I think about,"
Correction: "now that I think about it,"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/974
Error: "might have as well just"
Correction: "might as well have just"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1016
Error: "throw his AI core in the inventory"
Correction: "throw the AI core in his inventory"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1028
Error: "a bit more safer"
Correction: "a bit safer"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1168
Error: "when I mean me, I mean I am looking"
Correction: "say" instead of the first "mean" ("when I say me, I mean I am")
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1364
Error: "Ah, there is where you are Helios."
Correction: "Ah, there you are, Helios."
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/1366-1
Error: "what happened it is, greatly kind "
Correction: Remove the comma
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1417
Error: "I will describe though"
Correction: "I will describe it though"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1467
Error: "had suddenly fell from"
Correction: "had suddenly fallen from"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1494
Error: "On the other side of the tunnel"
Correction: End instead of side
Error: "the captain has already made not only out of"
Correction: "the captain has already made it, not only, out of"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/17-1
Error: "and you can get one if you want, if you want,"
Correction: Just eliminate the second "if you want"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/40
Error(?): "How good or bad these planets are, and two rounds of dice rolls determine how much you know about them off the bat."
Correction(?): I just don't really understand how the quality of the planets impacts how much you know about them, so maybe cut "How good or bad these planets are, and" out, or be more clear. It might just be me not understanding it though.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/45
Error: "your crew doesn’t think your choice on this matter wasn’t as stupid as I think it is"
Correction: Change wasn't to was
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/49-1
Error: "Rodney tapped hers jaw"
Correction: Hers -> her
Note: This only occurs, as far as I'm aware, if you give Rodney female pronouns and don't choose the traits for Rodney yourself.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/76-1
Error: "they didn't notice him he slinked"
Correction: Put "as" between him and he
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/177
Error: "Why don't you tell new crew"
Correction: Put "the" between tell and new
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/286
Error: "join me for a spot of lunch now? 888₤"
Correction: Add a period after 888₤ I guess, though it really isn't a sentence at all.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/735
Error: "If this plece"
Correction: piece instead of plece
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/743
Error: "Too shamed to fight"
Correction: Ashamed instead of shamed
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/768
Error: "Cobalt looked around Cobalt's pockets"
Correction: Maybe replace Cobalt's with whatever the entered pronoun is, also maybe use through instead of around. This really just makes the sentence flow better in my opinion though.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/791
Error: "now that I think about,"
Correction: "now that I think about it,"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/974
Error: "might have as well just"
Correction: "might as well have just"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1016
Error: "throw his AI core in the inventory"
Correction: "throw the AI core in his inventory"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1028
Error: "a bit more safer"
Correction: "a bit safer"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1168
Error: "when I mean me, I mean I am looking"
Correction: "say" instead of the first "mean" ("when I say me, I mean I am")
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1364
Error: "Ah, there is where you are Helios."
Correction: "Ah, there you are, Helios."
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/1366-1
Error: "what happened it is, greatly kind "
Correction: Remove the comma
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1417
Error: "I will describe though"
Correction: "I will describe it though"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1467
Error: "had suddenly fell from"
Correction: "had suddenly fallen from"
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1494
Error: "On the other side of the tunnel"
Correction: End instead of side
Error: "the captain has already made not only out of"
Correction: "the captain has already made it, not only, out of"
Command errors:
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/951
Error: It also happens for me where the command still says to greet your dad despite me picking female pronouns.
Have some cookies if you still need them:
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1222
Error: The player asks about NavigatorxKelda but Hermes talks about NoverusxNavigator instead.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/951
Error: It also happens for me where the command still says to greet your dad despite me picking female pronouns.
Have some cookies if you still need them:
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Spoiler{"fortuna":2,"seed1":27,"seed2":659,"name":"bappitybapcat","he":"she","him":"her","his":"hers","himself":"herself","seenaftik":"1","styletype":"dark","apollolove":6,"rodname":"Rodney","rodlast":"Lucum","rodhe":"she","rodhim":"her","rodhis":"hers","rodhimself":"herself","rodtraits":"1","plantname":"Sierra","peace":4,"friend":9,"extral":"extral","extrals":"extrals","rodpeace":"1","tangopirate":"1","cobname":"Cobalt","cobshe":"she","cobher":"her","cobhers":"hers","cobherself":"herself","artemisname":"bappitybapcat","captname":"Crimson","capthe":"he","capthim":"him","capthis":"his","capthimself":"hiself","helioslove":4,"artemisflirt":"1","clockworksign":"1","horsenick":"clip-clop","horsesound":"Pet me more!","horselike":"grass","horsedislike":"sky","horseenvironment":"pasture","horseaction":"rear","horsecolor":"coal black","heboy":"CowBoy","absolutetrash":"AbsoluteTrash","she":"Ready4DeathTBH","they":"SpeedyPiPython","it":"Ananke#3997","we":"AstroGlitch","none":"NotailFacts&More","us":"COLLECTIVEFUCKU","meme":"HOTdankBIRD\ud83d\udc4c\ud83d\ude24","donotyellatcowboy":"1","theytalk":1,"wetalk":1,"memetalk":1}
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1222
Error: The player asks about NavigatorxKelda but Hermes talks about NoverusxNavigator instead.
Visual errors:
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Pages: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/10 and https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/5
Error: On these pages, and probably any other pages with videos everything below the video, including the >Continue is pushed to the left so that the grey borders that usually run along either side are either cut off on the left side, or expanded on the right side. (I hope that my explanation makes sense.) This doesn't happen on any other pages though, just video pages as far as I've seen. I'm not really sure if this is a bug or not.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1118
Error: The description of the clingy trait is partially unreadable as it goes under the ribbon at the top of the page.
Pages: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/10 and https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/5
Error: On these pages, and probably any other pages with videos everything below the video, including the >Continue is pushed to the left so that the grey borders that usually run along either side are either cut off on the left side, or expanded on the right side. (I hope that my explanation makes sense.) This doesn't happen on any other pages though, just video pages as far as I've seen. I'm not really sure if this is a bug or not.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1118
Error: The description of the clingy trait is partially unreadable as it goes under the ribbon at the top of the page.
During the transition to the redux something was lost and now things don't make sense errors:
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Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/213
Error(?): The player no longer asks Apollo if the extral can talk with ghosts, so it doesn't really make sense when Apollo asks "Can you talk to ghosts? Cause um, I was asked if you could." so out of the blue like that.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1021
Error(?): It still says that Cobalt has the four leaf clover in her inventory, even though by this point I had thought it was used when going against the giant clockwork. I'm unsure if this is just my misinterpretation of this, so this may not be an error at all.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1385
Error: What would the player be assuming that Helios would be off doing if just 20 pages earlier we talked to him? He, at least in the choices I picked, wasn't going to go make a timeline anymore, so why would the player think that he wasn't responding right after saying that he would help us if we wrote in our notes? I don't really know, I just sort of confused by this part. (I do know the real reason why Helios isn't talking to us, it's not that which is confusing me.)
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1499
Error: "There seems to be some confusion over a pair of pants between the two but Crimson just keeps on moving."
This doesn't really make sense anymore as the player never spawned in a pair of pants for Helios, so it's just sort of confusing.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/213
Error(?): The player no longer asks Apollo if the extral can talk with ghosts, so it doesn't really make sense when Apollo asks "Can you talk to ghosts? Cause um, I was asked if you could." so out of the blue like that.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1021
Error(?): It still says that Cobalt has the four leaf clover in her inventory, even though by this point I had thought it was used when going against the giant clockwork. I'm unsure if this is just my misinterpretation of this, so this may not be an error at all.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1385
Error: What would the player be assuming that Helios would be off doing if just 20 pages earlier we talked to him? He, at least in the choices I picked, wasn't going to go make a timeline anymore, so why would the player think that he wasn't responding right after saying that he would help us if we wrote in our notes? I don't really know, I just sort of confused by this part. (I do know the real reason why Helios isn't talking to us, it's not that which is confusing me.)
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/1499
Error: "There seems to be some confusion over a pair of pants between the two but Crimson just keeps on moving."
This doesn't really make sense anymore as the player never spawned in a pair of pants for Helios, so it's just sort of confusing.