[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

Hey all! New user here, during my first read of Fortuna I noticed a bunch of small grammar errors, so I decided to re-read Fortuna and start posting all of the errors I see. I'm gonna list all of the errors I've noticed so far (In separate posts to avoid cluttering up the thread too badly). If any of them have already been submitted by someone else, just ignore them.
To avoid confusion, "->" will mean "should be" for the errors below.

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/q/21-1
Sentence with the error: "Though I wouldn't be surprised if you're just being a suckup (Player Name)."
What the error is: "suckup (Player Name)." -> "suckup, (Player Name)."
(This one might actually be right, it personally just looks like the comma should be there.)

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/24
Sentence with the error: "Yeah I don't care as well. Rodney is shaping up to be a fine captain I guess."
What the error is: Commas should be in place before both "I"s. "Yeah I" -> Yeah, I" "Captain I guess." -> "Captain, I guess."
What the error is (2): "as well" -> "either."

Page: Another error on page 24. Wanted to separate to avoid cluttering everything up too badly.
Sentence with the error: "In fact characters that aren’t starting characters are more likely to have more points!"
What the error is: "In fact" -> "In fact,"

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/26
Sentence with the error: "What's that (Player Name)?"
What the error is: "What's that (Player Name)?" -> "What's that, (Player Name?)"
(This one might also be right, just looks like the comma should be there.)

Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/27
Sentence with the error: "Do note there will always be 1 or 2 traits you can never change, sort of like real life (Player Name)!"
What the error is: "Sort of like real life (Player Name)!" -> "Sort of like real life, (Player Name!)"

If any of these are wrong, feel free to hit me with a PM and I'll edit them out.