RE: The People's Species (TIME FOR THE MAIN EVENT. SEE FIRST POST)
10-09-2018, 06:46 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-09-2018, 06:56 AM by LoverIan.)
ty very much!
oh my god the formatting....the formatting
Hm, a part of me isn't all into the In Soviet Russia. I think some of the references are good, but it otherwise feels over-bearing and probably 'Bad'. I think on a surface level cold war soviet russia and the related propaganda is good for aesthetics and inspiration, but I think we're bordering on a Joke Species that outside of memes could fall flat.
These parts though? Mm, delicious. 10/10
I'll probably go through and make some edits for flavor text.
Minor but we may want to remove 'puta'. I want to assume it's intentional but it's also worth mentioning "that's a swear word in spanish". It also kind of works with the informal tone of the article, but it probably shouldn't be there.
oh my god the formatting....the formatting
Hm, a part of me isn't all into the In Soviet Russia. I think some of the references are good, but it otherwise feels over-bearing and probably 'Bad'. I think on a surface level cold war soviet russia and the related propaganda is good for aesthetics and inspiration, but I think we're bordering on a Joke Species that outside of memes could fall flat.
These parts though? Mm, delicious. 10/10
Quote:Better Red than Dead: All of the comrades' traits are red, regardless of if they are neutral, positive, an ability, or a mystery trait. As such, any ability or trait that affects red traits is able to affect every trait, and similarly anything that affects other colors of traits isn't able to affect anything.
The People's Might: Comrades receive a one point stat bonus to all stats for each other comrade nearby, up to ten. This can not cause a stat to go over ten.
I'll probably go through and make some edits for flavor text.
Minor but we may want to remove 'puta'. I want to assume it's intentional but it's also worth mentioning "that's a swear word in spanish". It also kind of works with the informal tone of the article, but it probably shouldn't be there.