RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
10-08-2018, 10:56 PM
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4846
Error: I have set them both as my patrons for now and let them free-rome | why I'm letting Mors freely rome around
Correction: Rome is a city, roam is the movement.
Error: I recommend having Nike as a patron for this to keep their moral high but their sanity low.
Correction: Morale? Unless if starving yourself hurts your morals (which I guess technically it might but that's probably not what's intended here)
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4916
Errors: He rarely talks about it other then to comment about how rich he was. | Cea seems to be on a level even higher then the usual high class. | This raised more then a few red flags. | the only way I could explain how Cea seems to know more then he should. | "Marble dear I will have you know I am younger then that." | Edel takes care of the bird more then he does himself.
Correction: Hi Gime. Than is a word, too. I know how much you love this correction Ɛ>
Error: it seems the day Cea left his home was destroyed by a fire
Correction: Either put a comma after left, or put the word it after home, because you've got a garden path sentence here.
Error: On a mission, Captain Latta and me found a chest
Correction: Captain Latta and I. Me no find a chest.
Error: I have set them both as my patrons for now and let them free-rome | why I'm letting Mors freely rome around
Correction: Rome is a city, roam is the movement.
Error: I recommend having Nike as a patron for this to keep their moral high but their sanity low.
Correction: Morale? Unless if starving yourself hurts your morals (which I guess technically it might but that's probably not what's intended here)
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4916
Errors: He rarely talks about it other then to comment about how rich he was. | Cea seems to be on a level even higher then the usual high class. | This raised more then a few red flags. | the only way I could explain how Cea seems to know more then he should. | "Marble dear I will have you know I am younger then that." | Edel takes care of the bird more then he does himself.
Correction: Hi Gime. Than is a word, too. I know how much you love this correction Ɛ>
Error: it seems the day Cea left his home was destroyed by a fire
Correction: Either put a comma after left, or put the word it after home, because you've got a garden path sentence here.
Error: On a mission, Captain Latta and me found a chest
Correction: Captain Latta and I. Me no find a chest.