RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
09-01-2018, 03:46 AM
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4374
Sentence with Error: Cleo, would you like to taken to your room...
The Error: 'you like to be taken' not 'you like to taken'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4396
Sentence with Error 1: I was able to solve the issue with Eris and Nike early and thought I could make it back in time to pick what planet we could go to.
The Error 1: It should probably be 'what planet we would go to.' not 'what planet we could go to.'
Sentence with Error 2: It will soon become heavily annoying, maybe.
Error 2: 'It would soon become' not 'It will soon become'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4397
Error: Where pronouns for Cleo would normally be for this page there is nothing. Such as ''that would take all the scrap the crew had, decided to hold off on it.'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4406
Sentence with Error: I'm not scared of the dark unlike you.
Error: There should probably be either a comma after 'dark' or 'unlike' should be switched to 'like'.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4409
Sentence with Error: Speaking of of which, while relationships are complex and don't exist on just one axis, this still... y'know, a videogame
Error 1: 'Speaking ofof'
Error 2: 'this still' should be 'this is still'
Error 3: 'videogame' should be 'video game'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4433
Sentence with Error: 'people think I'm a loon, but I think both him and me are just misunderstood'
Error: Unless it's intentional that Cea's grammatically incorrect at this instance, it should be 'I think both him and I are' not 'him and me'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4443
Sentence with Error: 'it was only a memory he had be desensitized to long ago.'
Error: 'been' not 'be'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4453
Sentence with Error: Cleo slowly turns around to looks Edel in the eye. she disapproves.
Error 1: 'look' not 'looks'
Error 2: Either the 's' in 'she' should be capitalized or the period after eye should be made into a comma.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4472
Sentence with Error: vCO-PLAYER THE NOODLE JOKE WAS NOT A PLAN OF ACTION!
Error: Unless I'm mistaken there shouldn't be a 'v' at the beginning of this sentence.
Sentence with Error: Cleo, would you like to taken to your room...
The Error: 'you like to be taken' not 'you like to taken'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4396
Sentence with Error 1: I was able to solve the issue with Eris and Nike early and thought I could make it back in time to pick what planet we could go to.
The Error 1: It should probably be 'what planet we would go to.' not 'what planet we could go to.'
Sentence with Error 2: It will soon become heavily annoying, maybe.
Error 2: 'It would soon become' not 'It will soon become'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4397
Error: Where pronouns for Cleo would normally be for this page there is nothing. Such as ''that would take all the scrap the crew had, decided to hold off on it.'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4406
Sentence with Error: I'm not scared of the dark unlike you.
Error: There should probably be either a comma after 'dark' or 'unlike' should be switched to 'like'.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4409
Sentence with Error: Speaking of of which, while relationships are complex and don't exist on just one axis, this still... y'know, a videogame
Error 1: 'Speaking of
Error 2: 'this still' should be 'this is still'
Error 3: 'videogame' should be 'video game'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4433
Sentence with Error: 'people think I'm a loon, but I think both him and me are just misunderstood'
Error: Unless it's intentional that Cea's grammatically incorrect at this instance, it should be 'I think both him and I are' not 'him and me'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4443
Sentence with Error: 'it was only a memory he had be desensitized to long ago.'
Error: 'been' not 'be'
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4453
Sentence with Error: Cleo slowly turns around to looks Edel in the eye. she disapproves.
Error 1: 'look' not 'looks'
Error 2: Either the 's' in 'she' should be capitalized or the period after eye should be made into a comma.
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/4472
Sentence with Error: vCO-PLAYER THE NOODLE JOKE WAS NOT A PLAN OF ACTION!
Error: Unless I'm mistaken there shouldn't be a 'v' at the beginning of this sentence.