RE: [Cosmosdex] : Partial app opening
07-24-2018, 08:41 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-24-2018, 10:33 AM by Dorsidwarf.)
https://cosmosdex.com/fortuna/p/3756
Error: Well there’s nowhere to park a ship around here other than air base up north and the plains outside of town. I would investigate those areas for your ship. As for your crew I’ve only seen to people around, minus you two of course.
Correction(s) "other than the air base" and " Only seen two people "
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/lore/leg...eblowskowl
Error: When pretending to be a kindly, non-murderous aftik, He dresses in a friendly, and endearing fashion
Correction: aftik, he dresses
(error also on the legendary list)
Edit: actually the whole article is inconsistent and sometimes uses capital He and sometimes lowercase he
Page:https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/lore/legendary/o-2
Error: O-2 is very dark, meant for location where the sun is out in full power for much of the day.
Correction: " a location" or "locations"
Page:https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/fauna/ivfrid
Error: Any ivfrid that survives delivery will oven clean their young, and then nurse them via their nub-glands.
Correction: I dont know what this sentence is meant to say but I really dont think they spray the baby down with OvenPride and leave for 30-45 minutes
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/fauna/unicorn
Error: Both the common unicorn and their subspecies have both flat teeth for grinding, as well as four sharper teeths for biting and tearing. /AND/ This same fact allows unicorns to do most of the jobs that horses have, but as unicorns are more fickled it is much easier to use the more obtainable, and reliable, horse.
Correction: teeth is already plural /AND/ "more fickle" not "more fickled"
Error: Well there’s nowhere to park a ship around here other than air base up north and the plains outside of town. I would investigate those areas for your ship. As for your crew I’ve only seen to people around, minus you two of course.
Correction(s) "other than the air base" and " Only seen two people "
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/lore/leg...eblowskowl
Error: When pretending to be a kindly, non-murderous aftik, He dresses in a friendly, and endearing fashion
Correction: aftik, he dresses
(error also on the legendary list)
Edit: actually the whole article is inconsistent and sometimes uses capital He and sometimes lowercase he
Page:https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/lore/legendary/o-2
Error: O-2 is very dark, meant for location where the sun is out in full power for much of the day.
Correction: " a location" or "locations"
Page:https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/fauna/ivfrid
Error: Any ivfrid that survives delivery will oven clean their young, and then nurse them via their nub-glands.
Correction: I dont know what this sentence is meant to say but I really dont think they spray the baby down with OvenPride and leave for 30-45 minutes
Page: https://cosmosdex.com/cosmosdex/fauna/unicorn
Error: Both the common unicorn and their subspecies have both flat teeth for grinding, as well as four sharper teeths for biting and tearing. /AND/ This same fact allows unicorns to do most of the jobs that horses have, but as unicorns are more fickled it is much easier to use the more obtainable, and reliable, horse.
Correction: teeth is already plural /AND/ "more fickle" not "more fickled"