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05-18-2018, 11:38 PM
A name?
Never been much one for names, they tend to chafe a bit; nevermind the power one holds.
But, ah. Suppose I/O, Io, I-O or any other such variation would suffice.
The duo's lives aren't quite ripe enough yet. One way or another, their story should have a proper conclusion.
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Let's see... The beacon will launch, sending its message and guiding refugees to Chiron, or it might. The future is a bit more fluid than the present, and a fair deal more workable.
Let's say it does, and call it branch A.
Of course, if it does happen there are a few setpieces we would need.
Does Dime find the bug? Belfry? Anyone? The story would work either way, but the decision will ripple and become more relevant over time.
Tension rising to its highest point as Dime comes so, so close to stopping Belfry from using the beacon, but fails at the last moment.
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End of book one, begin the next.
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What happens between the beacon launching and the refugees arrival? A timeskip most likely, but there is room for a good deal of character growth here.
What happens when the refugees arive? Do they come guns blazing or in peace? Does the world see them as the refugees they are or will the Lizard people convince them they are horrific monsters at every turn?
Will their differences be resolved peacefully, or will tensions rise into open conflict?
If open conflict, then how does it end? Does it end? Who, if anyone, is the winner?
Their is a shrill noise in the air today. Or is that just the wind?
Not much content to add, but questions others may work with aplenty.
Quiet. Good for an unusual opinion. Doesn't talk much.
