RE: Makin' Music
03-08-2013, 08:27 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-08-2013, 08:28 AM by Jacquerel.)
I played music for a while but it's been long enough now (five years already? oof) that I've forgotten most of the terminology so there's not much specific I can think to say other than "I think you did best on that second one".
The other two are good but they sound, I don't know, sort of ponderous? Like there isn't really any buildup or momentum, they just start and keep going and then finish.
This is also true of the more solemn one but it seems more appropriate there, and it has more of a defined beginning and middle (maybe not ending, it sort of just cuts out, but if it's meant to be looped that is fine).
The other two are good but they sound, I don't know, sort of ponderous? Like there isn't really any buildup or momentum, they just start and keep going and then finish.
This is also true of the more solemn one but it seems more appropriate there, and it has more of a defined beginning and middle (maybe not ending, it sort of just cuts out, but if it's meant to be looped that is fine).