RE: Ignore This
04-29-2018, 06:13 PM
I'm glad you're getting into the spirit! But... er, maybe we can wait on the blood sacrifices or ritual arson or whatever? That seems a little extreme for the start of the story.
'Sides, I already retrieved "my arms" from the Save Draft box. Someone suggested that earlier, before I started writing. I guess people leave unused bits of other adventures in there or something? But anyway, that's what's letting me reply to you, so I'm probably good for now. Let's avoid any sacrifices for now?
(04-28-2018, 08:38 PM)Reyweld Wrote: »>I can be your narrator
Aww dang. That's really thoughtful, and I appreciate it. But I'm finally getting psyched up to do this. Let me give it a shot for a bit, though I'll keep your offer in mind? For the time being, though, please feel free to help out with the brainstorming and whatever!
(04-28-2018, 07:49 PM)LammarWesley Wrote: »>Be the narrator!
>What about a fantasy setting with cute dragons and... clowns... A lot of clonws?!
> OR something spoopy, like ghosts and ghost-busting?!
> that's sure a good setting.
>ghosts. hehehe
Clowns? Don't get me started on the clowns. I swear, some nights I can hear their big floppy shoes scampering around. If you want spooky, clowns are nightmare fuel enough for me.
Ghosts though? Ghosts can be fun. So are cute dragons! Cute dragon ghosts maybe? I'unno. Let's keep workshopping this. I bet there's a good story here.
(04-28-2018, 08:01 PM)Dragon Fogel Wrote: »Well, you're in some kind of weird space between active and abandoned adventures right now, if I'm understanding correctly. So let's start by making the most of your circumstances and see what we can find by exploring the place.
Maybe we'll find a plot hook! Or some characters to interact with! No way to know until we try, right?
That's a good idea! I bet there's a lot of cool stories and plot hooks out there! Definitely more than are in this room, right?
Oh, wait. You can't see anything in here, can you? I should be describing the area or something. That's part of the narrator's job, right?
Well, here goes.
You are in a square room. There's a door on the other end of the room that says "Leave". Where you're at now, there's a desk where you've been reading the messages you have been leaving. Er... or rather, where you've been reading messages from... other people? Who are also you?
Anyway, there's a box with a lid in the corner that says "Save Draft". That's where you found my arms. I mean, your arms. And you have a bed you've been sleeping in when things get quiet around here. Some other little things around, but it's a pretty plain room, I'm not gonna lie.
Okay. I guess I should try the "Leave" door next. I hope there's cool stuff out there like you said! Though I should probably narrate this too...
Let's see. So, you're crossing the room over to the door. Going to try opening it. You've got the door knob now. You're turning it. Okay, it turns. Now You're pushing it... nghh. The door is stuck? It won't open!
Dang it! I really wanted to see what was out there...