The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5

The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5
RE: The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5
(04-22-2018, 05:04 AM)El Santo Wrote: »Relda: Keep focused on the contests when the pie throwing comes give it all you got throw that pie into orbit and bring down a satellite!

Satellite, really be in orbit for some mysterious and unexplained reason.

(04-22-2018, 05:04 AM)El Santo Wrote: »Avagadro: Prostrate yourself on the ground before Relda and promise her, her every wish and desire. Begin kissing her feet

This is weird. The reason I opened the Ballad today was to edit my own submission to add exactly that suggestion. Though I would have used the sentence "Grovel at her feet".
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RE: The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5 - by a52 - 08-22-2016, 07:26 PM
RE: The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5 - by a52 - 09-08-2016, 04:46 AM
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RE: The Ballad of Adler Young, Canto 2.5 - by Torchfire - 04-22-2018, 02:24 PM