RE: Hawkspace Isles: Wings of Chaos
04-16-2018, 11:46 AM
One of my main pitfalls with DTP that had nothing to do with the trouble I had focusing on it (I had real life studies to commit and prioritise) was that the protagonist would have been a human, even though I established early on that this would be a "No humans" setting, because I wanted whimsy and novelty and all kinds of weird shit. Ultimately I must have not cared enough for the story to actually follow it through to the end. Or maybe it was because the setting was too under-developed but that's not a real excuse.