RE: Waterworks
01-17-2018, 01:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-17-2018, 02:01 AM by smuchmuch.)
Quote:Sorry to say, but this interlude has officially overstayed its welcome in my eyes. This seems like a good spot to leave off on and build intrigue. We can get back to the Meanie Greenies and their Nanobot Escapades later.
I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure we ARE out of the interlude. Or,at least that what we're in now is meant to be relevant to the main 'Back goo' plot (there's no way that petri dish of black goo carawling tot he remain of chambers and being hit by whatever the master key nanobots energy thngy wasn't foreshadowing to something).
And when we're back then there'll be the whle Connie battle in the mind stuff that it'd be nice to wrap up.
Let's face it this adventure kinda got lost in plot creep and suffered from pacing problem for a while now, and I can understand if Lufa needs some time to work their way way back to the main waterwork and the story.
Quote:Now I'm new in town, so I guess I don't really have perspective on how long this interlude has been going on. But I do know that interludes with this style of comic have a way of dragging on and on and on. I think now's a good time to cut it off, with that nice cinematic limb-theft, and go on to the primary story and save the rest of this interlude for another point.
It lasted for.. a little less then four years now andabout a small third of the log by now ?