RE: Waterworks
01-16-2018, 11:21 PM
(01-16-2018, 06:35 PM)Electric-Nope Wrote: »Sorry to say, but this interlude has officially overstayed its welcome in my eyes. This seems like a good spot to leave off on and build intrigue. We can get back to the Meanie Greenies and their Nanobot Escapades later.
Now I'm new in town, so I guess I don't really have perspective on how long this interlude has been going on. But I do know that interludes with this style of comic have a way of dragging on and on and on. I think now's a good time to cut it off, with that nice cinematic limb-theft, and go on to the primary story and save the rest of this interlude for another point.
>Camera: Cut dramatically to someone a bit more present, or maybe future, but not past.