small fortuna 2.0 "choice" inconsistency
11-19-2017, 11:46 PM
are these kinds of reports accepted?
on page 50, Cobalt is clearly referred to as Rodney's daughter, even though her gender (among other things) is later selected on page 247
if the reader doesn't want to go with the default gender, it can be awkward looking back and seeing that Cobalt is still referred to as "her". this could be fixed just by just slipping some gender-ambiguous writing into page 50.
on page 50, Cobalt is clearly referred to as Rodney's daughter, even though her gender (among other things) is later selected on page 247
if the reader doesn't want to go with the default gender, it can be awkward looking back and seeing that Cobalt is still referred to as "her". this could be fixed just by just slipping some gender-ambiguous writing into page 50.
I tend not to draw very well, so don't expect me to do much other than look at Fortuna fanventures.