RE: Vox Mentis Discussion
05-31-2017, 07:52 AM
Caught up and finished yesterday - too late to do any suggesting, but thanks for the ride Douglas! It was a really good read, and I'm glad I could be a part of it for at least the earlier segments.
You've mentioned that the story's been on some rails, but I'm curious at what point you had some of the important plot points nailed down - particularly that Elise would be compromised into going back to Broken Hill, and the finale in general.
Were those already mostly set by the time we got to Elise's meeting with Thoreau, or were things still up in the air at the point? (I'd assume by the time Elise was in Broken Hill/meeting Danny things came together pretty fast if they hadn't already).
You've mentioned that the story's been on some rails, but I'm curious at what point you had some of the important plot points nailed down - particularly that Elise would be compromised into going back to Broken Hill, and the finale in general.
Were those already mostly set by the time we got to Elise's meeting with Thoreau, or were things still up in the air at the point? (I'd assume by the time Elise was in Broken Hill/meeting Danny things came together pretty fast if they hadn't already).