National NaNoWriMo Doing Month!

what?
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"He hated kids, and kids who were over thirty were even worse."
oh. Oh. I thought that meant Zembra was over thirty and was acting like a kid. :/
no biggie though!

So, the way i understand it....
Plot summary so far

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Jessica and Sarah Jane Rainbow wish Rhianna away, Rhianna becomes Connie.

Jessica wishes for candy rain.

Some guy makes the 8 o'clock wish to attract some wishfinders to his house

fairly straightforward, the incident in chapter one happens as Hanson and Chris go investigate the rain.
Jessica and Chris leave with the doll.

Zembra takes over candy rain case. Hanson doesn't like that.

Hanson goes off to work on his case a little more.
Meanwhile, Zembra plots to kill Hanson.
Meanwhile, Connie has kidnapped some kid who isn't Zembra, and then Connie "dies" and loses her memory again.
Her killer, Delia, makes contact with an unknown woman, who also plots to kill Hanson (maybe with Zembra). This unknown woman's ultimate goal is to make a world without wishes(?).
Hanson calls Jessica's mom, Rhianna/Connie, tracks her down and brings her to Wishfinder HQ.

Meanwhile, turns out Chris and Sarah Jane Rainbow are 'together forever'. SJR apparently has some big enemies that aren't the wishfinders(?) Chris tries to kill herself to kill SJR too, but only ends up doing a body swap. SJR is in Chris' 12 year old body.

Meanwhile, Rhianna goes all possesedy-creepy and does something. Edison is like what??? and gets knocked out

Hanson works on the 8 o'clock guy case. He and Tyson head off to Mr. 8 o'clock's place. Mr 8o says that he is trying to contact the Wishfinders without 'THEM' finding out, to give the wishfinder's a warning about SOMETHING, but he dies from poison tea before he can give much info.

character guide: (not very in-depth, doesn't have character traits, for example. i'll leave you guys to fill those parts in if you want)

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Arlene: dorm-mate (?) with Hanson. Best character.
Dispatcher: aka D. boss of wishfinders.
Hanson: wishfinder agent, partners with Chris
Chris: wishfinder agent. captured by SJR
Sarah Jane Rainbow: evil doll. previously owned by Chris when she was a little girl, now owned by Jessica.
Jessica: innocent little girl? her innocence is questioned in chapter three(?)
Rhianna: mother of Jessica. Apparently loses her memory and takes on new identities a lot. Aka as Connie. Good at not dying.
Tyson: wishfinder agent, working on Mr. Eight o'clock case
Edison: wishfinder agent. guarding Rhianna
Zembra: wishfinder agent, forever 21. i mean 12. is she good or evil?
Delia: tried to kill Connie. is a little girl. but bad.
Unknown Woman: works with Delia. (delia's boss?). wants to rid the world of wishes(?). needs to kill Hanson and Chris to do that.(?)
Clarence: aka Mr. 8 o clock. Was gonna die anyway. Wanted to warn wishfinders about something.

Did i miss anything or get anything wrong?

I suspect some people might say that Delia and Zembra are the same girl, but I think it makes more sense actually if you read it where the two girls are different people. That's what I've been doing and it makes sense to me! (ironically but not coincidentally, as the one who authored the apparently most confusing passage, I seem to be the least confused by what's going on)

Maybe at the end we could go back and edit things just a little bit, such as taking out this paragraph

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Zembra hung up the phone. Excellent! There was only one more loose end to take care of. She added a final line to the report she was typing up. “Casualties: Agent Hanson and Agent Lawra.”

Time to make it fact.

She grabbed her coat and her gun, and stepped out of the door.

because it implies that Zembra is in some sort of office typing things and we all agree that she isn't?