[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train

[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train
RE: [Cosmosdex] Minor:11/5 Talk Species to me
(11-06-2016, 05:03 AM)Gimeurcookie Wrote: »Contractors added. Temp home here. Edits below.

- Whole Physical Description has been changed and added to.
- Pluto changed to "Unknown" in god section.
- There's a lot of edits you'll just have to read the app.

Some last minute edits/comments:

- What images will you be using, if not ZQ's first drawings?

- Add ", with a heavy focus on self-defense grabs and disarming techniques. Recruited contractors may incorporate elements of their prior species' styles into their fighting." onto the end of their fighting style section.

- Did you mean Thanatos when you added Tartarus to the patron list? If so, I'm not sure he's such a good match for the race that totes subtlety as their primary weapon. (Also, who is Nyx?)

- If the traditional concept of "demons" doesn't exist here, then maybe the "Demons" nickname should be replaced with something like "Suits".

- I see you did away with the whole "secretly don't need to eat" bit. Not sure how I feel about that, though I suppose it would work as trivia.

I swear this'll be it from me. I dunno, I kinda... sort of care a lot about this race, but it's not really my "baby" in that I'd be unable to do anything not-stupid with them outside of Fortuna, myself?
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[Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train - by Gimeurcookie - 05-29-2016, 10:18 AM
RE: [Cosmosdex] Migration: DONE! - by Fellow - 07-22-2016, 09:36 PM
RE: [Cosmosdex] Site Junk: 9/7 - by Fellow - 09-07-2016, 04:15 PM
RE: [Cosmosdex] Site Junk: 9/7 - by TangledAlmond - 09-07-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: [Cosmosdex] Site Junk: 9/7 - by Gimeurcookie - 09-08-2016, 12:19 AM
RE: [Cosmosdex] Minor:11/5 Talk Species to me - by DetectiveCaillou - 11-06-2016, 06:12 AM
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RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train - by Gold - 08-29-2018, 07:08 AM
RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train - by Yaveker - 08-30-2018, 04:01 AM
RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train - by Fellow - 08-31-2018, 09:17 PM
RE: [Cosmosdex] : Redux Error Train - by Kíeros - 09-13-2018, 01:28 AM
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