Critique and Advice; the treadmill of adventuring.

If you want feedback on your /qst/ run please link to it!

While I would be very eager to talk about it, I think I'll wait for the time being. Plus it's literally my first foray into interactive fiction so there's a lot of glaring mistakes.

Run the story here as a remake, no reason to fret about running for realsies

But I digress, what do you mean by that? Keep the story as a remake? I suppose I can do that. However I do intend to fully allow commands once I've reached a certain point in the story since I would have all the elements I need by then.