Destroy the Big Bad

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Destroy the Big Bad
RE: Destroy the Big Bad
(09-15-2016, 03:40 AM)qwerx3 Wrote: »Guess it's time to start over from the top?
Okay then!

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    A Poem


        A Raven

Midnights so dreary, tired and weary,
    Silently pondering volumes extolling all by-now obsolete lore.
During my rather long nap - the weirdest tap!
    An ominous vibrating sound disturbing my chamber's antedoor.
        "This", I whispered quietly, "I ignore".

Perfectly, the intellect remembers: the ghostly fires, a glittering ember.
    Inflamed by lightning's outbursts, windows cast penumbras upon this floor.
Sorrowful, as one mistreated, unhappy thoughts I heeded:
    That inimitable lesson in elegance - Lenore -
        Is delighting, exciting...nevermore.

Ominously, curtains parted (my serenity outsmarted),
    And fear overcame my being - the fear of "forevermore".
Fearful foreboding abided, selfish sentiment confided,
    As I said, "Methinks mysterious traveler knocks afore.
        A man is visiting, of age threescore."

Taking little time, briskly addressing something: "Sir," (robustly)
    "Tell what source originates clamorous noise afore?
Disturbing sleep unkindly, is it you a-tapping, so slyly?
    Why, devil incarnate!--" Here completely unveiled I my antedoor--
        Just darkness, I ascertained - nothing more.

While surrounded by darkness then, I persevered to clearly comprehend.
    I perceived the weirdest dream...of everlasting "nevermores".
Quite, quite, quick nocturnal doubts fled - such relief! - as my intellect said,
    (Desiring, imagining still) that perchance the apparition was uttering a whispered "Lenore".
        This only, as evermore.

Silently, I reinforced, remaining anxious, quite scared, afraid,
    While intrusive tap did then come thrice - O, so stronger than sounded afore.
"Surely" (said silently) "it was the banging, clanging window lattice."
    Glancing out, I quaked, upset by horrors hereinbefore,
        Perceiving: a "nevermore".

Completely disturbed, I said, "Utter, please, what prevails ahead.
    Repose, relief, cessation, or but more dreary 'nevermores'?"
The bird intruded thence - O, irritation ever since! -
    Then sat on Pallas' pallid bust, watching me (I sat not, therefore),
        And stated "nevermores".

Bemused by raven's dissonance, my soul exclaimed, "I seek intelligence;
    Explain thy purpose, or soon cease intoning forlorn 'nevermores'!"
"Nevermores", winged corvus proclaimed - thusly was a raven named?
    Actually maintain a surname, upon Pluvious seashore?
        I heard an oppressive "nevermore".

My sentiments extremely pained, to perceive an utterance so plain,
    Most interested, mystified, a meaning I hoped for.
"Surely," said the raven's watcher, "separate discourse is wiser.
    Therefore, liberation I'll obtain, retreating heretofore -
        Eliminating all the 'nevermores' ".

Still, the detestable raven just remained, unmoving, on sculptured bust.
    Always saying "never" (by a red chamber's door).
A poor, tender heartache maven - a sorrowful bird - a raven!
    O, I wished thoroughly, forthwith, that he'd fly heretofore.
        Still sitting, he recited "nevermores".

The raven's dirge induced alarm - "nevermore" quite wearisome.
    I meditated: "Might its utterances summarize of a calamity before?"
O, a sadness was manifest - a sorrowful cry of unrest;
    "O," I thought sincerely, "it's a melancholy great - furthermore,
        Removing doubt, this explains 'nevermores' ".

Seizing just that moment to sit - closely, carefully, advancing beside it,
    Sinking down, intrigued, where velvet cushion lay afore.
A creature, midnight-black, watched there - it studied my soul, unawares.
    Wherefore, explanations my insight entreated for.
        Silently, I pondered the "nevermores".

"Disentangle, nefarious bird! Disengage - I am disturbed!"
    Intently its eye burned, raising the cry within my core.
"That delectable Lenore - whose velvet pillow this was, heretofore,
    Departed thence, unsettling my consciousness therefore.
        She's returning - that maiden - aye, nevermore."

Since, to me, that thought was madness, I renounced continuing sadness.
    Continuing on, I soundly, adamantly forswore:
"Wretch," (addressing blackbird only) "fly swiftly - emancipate me!"
    "Respite, respite, detestable raven - and discharge me, I implore!"
        A ghostly answer of: "nevermore".

" 'Tis a prophet? Wraith? Strange devil? Or the ultimate evil?"
    "Answer, tempter-sent creature!", I inquired, like before.
"Forlorn, though firmly undaunted, with 'nevermores' quite indoctrinated,
    Is everything depressing, generating great sorrow evermore?
        I am subdued!", I then swore.

In answer, the raven turned - relentless distress it spurned.
    "Comfort, surcease, quiet, silence!" - pleaded I for.
"Will my (abusive raven!) sorrows persist unabated?
    Nevermore Lenore respondeth?", adamantly I encored.
        The appeal was ignored.

"O, satanic inferno's denizen -- go!", I said boldly, standing then.
    "Take henceforth loathsome "nevermores" - O, to an ugly Plutonian shore!
Let nary one expression, O bird, remain still here, replacing mirth.
    Promptly leave and retreat!", I resolutely swore.
        Blackbird's riposte: "nevermore".

So he sitteth, observing always, perching ominously on these doorways.
    Squatting on the stony bust so untroubled, O therefore.
Suffering stark raven's conversings, so I am condemned, subserving,
    To a nightmare cursed, containing miseries galore.
        Thus henceforth, I'll rise (from a darkness, a grave) -- nevermore!

                        -- Allanpoe, E.

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Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-08-2016, 09:33 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-08-2016, 10:02 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-08-2016, 10:52 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-08-2016, 11:12 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-09-2016, 01:39 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-09-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-09-2016, 11:18 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-09-2016, 09:05 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by btp - 09-09-2016, 09:28 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-09-2016, 09:40 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-09-2016, 09:44 PM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-09-2016, 10:27 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-09-2016, 10:30 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 09:03 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-10-2016, 09:23 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-10-2016, 11:34 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by btp - 09-10-2016, 05:38 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-10-2016, 06:08 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-10-2016, 06:18 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 06:55 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 06:56 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-10-2016, 07:02 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 08:46 PM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-10-2016, 07:36 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-15-2016, 04:06 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-10-2016, 08:20 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 08:51 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-10-2016, 08:51 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-10-2016, 09:03 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-15-2016, 04:56 PM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-10-2016, 11:07 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-10-2016, 11:29 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-11-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-11-2016, 01:53 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-11-2016, 01:55 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Dalmationer - 09-11-2016, 02:24 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-11-2016, 04:05 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-11-2016, 04:07 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-16-2016, 12:24 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-11-2016, 06:34 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Sleepy - 09-11-2016, 08:26 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-11-2016, 11:29 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-11-2016, 02:54 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-11-2016, 04:36 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-11-2016, 07:04 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-11-2016, 08:31 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-12-2016, 04:17 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-12-2016, 04:18 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-12-2016, 05:09 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-12-2016, 05:55 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by ☆ C.H.W.O.K.A ☆ - 09-12-2016, 07:00 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-12-2016, 08:47 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-13-2016, 06:35 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Gatr - 09-12-2016, 09:49 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-12-2016, 11:05 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Sruixan - 09-12-2016, 09:54 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Loather - 09-13-2016, 12:06 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Loather - 09-13-2016, 12:11 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-13-2016, 12:14 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Loather - 09-13-2016, 12:14 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Loather - 09-13-2016, 12:16 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Loather - 09-13-2016, 12:16 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-13-2016, 12:20 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by ☆ C.H.W.O.K.A ☆ - 09-13-2016, 12:55 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-13-2016, 01:00 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by a52 - 09-13-2016, 02:22 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by a52 - 09-15-2016, 03:51 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:56 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by btp - 09-13-2016, 02:32 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-13-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-13-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-13-2016, 05:00 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-13-2016, 06:41 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by TrickleJest - 09-13-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Reyweld - 09-13-2016, 11:02 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-13-2016, 06:57 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-13-2016, 07:17 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by ☆ C.H.W.O.K.A ☆ - 09-13-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-13-2016, 08:45 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by OTTO - 09-15-2016, 02:47 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Sleepy - 09-15-2016, 03:08 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:09 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:10 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-15-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 03:16 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:21 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by OTTO - 09-15-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:25 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 03:27 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:29 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 03:31 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-15-2016, 03:34 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 03:37 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kíeros - 09-15-2016, 03:38 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-15-2016, 03:40 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 03:42 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 04:02 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 04:17 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 04:24 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 04:12 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 04:51 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-15-2016, 04:29 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Kaynato - 09-15-2016, 04:33 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 04:47 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 04:57 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 05:07 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-15-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 05:12 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Sleepy - 09-15-2016, 05:24 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-15-2016, 05:41 AM
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RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Sleepy - 09-15-2016, 10:29 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by OTTO - 09-15-2016, 04:31 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 04:31 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 04:34 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Robust Laser - 09-15-2016, 08:39 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-15-2016, 10:11 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by qwerx3 - 09-15-2016, 10:31 PM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by OTTO - 09-16-2016, 12:14 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by OTTO - 09-16-2016, 12:15 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-16-2016, 12:38 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by invertedTsukkomi - 09-16-2016, 12:38 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by Schazer - 09-16-2016, 01:12 AM
RE: Destroy the Big Bad - by a52 - 09-16-2016, 04:22 AM