Advice wanted please

Even though I knew from the start that this was a small board, I thought that if I put out something I wanted to write, non-serious as it is I could still have fun with it. Obviously this is going to go into "creepy topic where single person talks to themselves for long period of time" territory real fast.

So if I could get some real advice, what would be the best place or way to post my own story and share feedback with people? Clearly this isn't working out here and I'm regretting ever trying this place out.