RE: Critique and Advice; the treadmill of adventuring.
07-04-2016, 09:03 PM
I saw your post Chwoka and I thought it was fine!
I really liked the part where you said, keep the explanation of the time travel as simple as possible. I know a lot of thought goes in to time travel but I feel for the reader's sake it's better to keep it short and sweet unless the comic is high sci-fi or something.
I've read a few comics where they would bring out charts and all these equations I didn't know to explain time travel and my first thought was "I didn't study for this test."
I really liked the part where you said, keep the explanation of the time travel as simple as possible. I know a lot of thought goes in to time travel but I feel for the reader's sake it's better to keep it short and sweet unless the comic is high sci-fi or something.
I've read a few comics where they would bring out charts and all these equations I didn't know to explain time travel and my first thought was "I didn't study for this test."