THE BOOK OF GLINT - [Ch01-Up04] - The Arrival [15.06.2016]

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THE BOOK OF GLINT - [Ch01-Up04] - The Arrival [15.06.2016]
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RE: THE BOOK OF GLINT - [Ch01-Up04] - The Arrival [15.06.2016]
For starters, awesome update! I like the comic format, the panelling is dynamic (good!) and the camera angles are inventive (double good!) There's too much text in the speech bubbles, but this is just my pet peeve, and they serve well to explain the story. The art and coloring, as always, are superb. Content-wise I like the update too, it sets the story in motion and gives the characters a reasonable reason to go on adventures. I'm looking towards getting to know the personality of Valriella (and Marcus) better, in this update she mostly served as the author mouthpiece to tell exposition to the readers. I really dig how she gave the two coins back to Cayla for the ferry ride, it's funny and tells something about her nature!


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RE: THE BOOK OF GLINT - [Ch01-Up04] - The Arrival [15.06.2016] - by tronn - 06-15-2016, 06:57 AM