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Critique and Advice; the treadmill of adventuring.
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RE: Critique and Advice; the treadmill of adventuring.
05-16-2016, 07:41 AM
(05-16-2016, 07:24 AM)KittenEater Wrote: »goin 2 bed but if anyone has any critique for tossaway i'd like to hear it
also i guess if anyone has questions about what the point of the adventure is, i can try to reveal a few small things?? idk i just wanna talk about my adventure i guess

my critique is i like it and it's great.

the only thing that needs work is on not being so GOSH DAMN CUTE (jk never change it)
Hi there! I'd really appreciate it if you took some time to read my adventure Madeline Beaufort and the Moon Thief! Thanks!
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