Short stories to zine, feedback requested?

Hey guys, IDK if this is the right place for this but I'm doing a couple of short stories with the intent of producing a zine for a zinefest here in the city on the 8th.

They're up on dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/5zw12p5b1alpf..._t8Aa?dl=0

Season of the sea is still unfinished at the moment, so please ignore that one, but the others have all been completed and have received editing.

Thanks!