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RE: Post making contest - Ixcaliber - 07-26-2016 Okay so back when I wrote this it was intended as a way to throw together a whole bunch of concepts I had for other things and write short (maybe?) self contained stories with a consistent locale and cast. Each chapter is (probably?) its own self contained story so I can tear these things apart one chapter at a time. Right off the bat the title of the first chapter is just... you know sometimes you see those books/movies/whatever that have been constructed around a single perfect pun and its all real contrived to fit to that one title. Well the first chapter is that but the title makes no sense. It's not a clever pun, it's not even a pun. It's a fundamental misunderstanding of a popular song title. I'm more embarrassed by this than anything else I've ever written and this is just the title. It doesn't bode well. RE: Post making contest - Sruixan - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:08 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »I'm more embarrassed by this than anything else I've ever written and this is just the title. I'M CRYING RE: Post making contest - Kaynato - 07-26-2016 story of a thing there was a thing hello, thing, said another thing. it's time to die... thing died end RE: Post making contest - OTTO - 07-26-2016 You must be registered to view this content. RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 Magnesium hydroxide is an inorganic compound with the chemical formula of hydrated Mg(OH)2. It is often known as milk of magnesia, because of its milk-like appearance as a suspension. RE: Post making contest - Kaynato - 07-26-2016 epsom salts RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 Paper made from chemical pulps are also known as wood-free papers–not to be confused with tree-free paper; this is because they do not contain lignin, which deteriorates over time. RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 table salts RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 RE: Post making contest - Ixcaliber - 07-26-2016 i'm gonna have to make a new thread to tear this terrible old novel to pieces in RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 03:53 PM)Kíeros Wrote: »Passes 1 rule, 2 negarules.(07-24-2016, 11:35 PM)Robust Laser Wrote: »a meany memey machineyI know what you mean, and I'm so happy. Rats live on no evil star, and I'm surprised that nobody has done this yet. (07-26-2016, 04:14 PM)Kaynato Wrote: »Passes 0 rules, 0 negarules. (07-26-2016, 04:27 PM)Dragon Fogel Wrote: »Passes 2 rules, 0 negarules. (07-26-2016, 04:32 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »laser orb is the hot new meme pass it on Passes 0 rules, 0 negarules. (07-26-2016, 04:34 PM)Dragon Fogel Wrote: » Passes 0 and -0 (07-26-2016, 04:36 PM)Dragon Fogel Wrote: » Passes 0 and -0 (07-26-2016, 05:35 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »We are coming up to the quadruple 8! Passes 0 and -0 (07-26-2016, 05:37 PM)Reyweld Wrote: »Did you just............................................... flip....................... my switch??????Passes.... 0 and -0. (07-26-2016, 05:59 PM)Kaynato Wrote: »GOOD TIDING Passes 0 and -0. (07-26-2016, 06:29 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »If the novel describes some unreal things, and you're terrified by it...Passes 0 and -0. (07-26-2016, 07:15 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »okay i got distracted but so far i've read maybe the first paragraph or so and it's 1) lazy exposition, 2) i guess i didn't understand just how dangerous and long lasting nuclear fallout was back when i was eighteen (23 years after a nuclear apocalypse everything should have cleared up and everything would be back to normal again right?), 2b) this observation gives an incredibly misleading idea as to what this story is going to be about, 3) teenage sex fantasy worldbuilding and i promise that this isn't that kind of story eitherPasses 0 and -1. (07-26-2016, 09:56 PM)Sruixan Wrote: »This is update #207.Passes 0 and 1. (07-26-2016, 10:08 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »Okay so back when I wrote this it was intended as a way to throw together a whole bunch of concepts I had for other things and write short (maybe?) self contained stories with a consistent locale and cast. Each chapter is (probably?) its own self contained story so I can tear these things apart one chapter at a time.Passes 0 and 0. (07-26-2016, 10:15 PM)Sruixan Wrote: »Passes 1 and -2.(07-26-2016, 10:08 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »I'm more embarrassed by this than anything else I've ever written and this is just the title. (07-26-2016, 10:17 PM)Kaynato Wrote: »story of a thingPasses 0 and 0. Passes 0 and -1. (07-26-2016, 10:19 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »Magnesium hydroxide is an inorganic compound with the chemical formula of hydrated Mg(OH)2. It is often known as milk of magnesia, because of its milk-like appearance as a suspension.Passes 0 and 0. (07-26-2016, 10:22 PM)Kaynato Wrote: »epsom saltsPasses 0 and -1. (07-26-2016, 10:23 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »Paper made from chemical pulps are also known as wood-free papers–not to be confused with tree-free paper; this is because they do not contain lignin, which deteriorates over time.Passes 1 and -1. Which is weird, honestly. I don't see any reason that should have triggered that negarule but it's just not there apparently. Originally I said this passes 0 regular rules that was a mistake. (07-26-2016, 10:28 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »table salts Passes 0 and 0. RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:34 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »Passes 1 and 0. (07-26-2016, 10:34 PM)Ixcaliber Wrote: »i'm gonna have to make a new thread to tear this terrible old novel to pieces in Passes 0 and 0. RE: FINGERTIPS 2: ELECTRIC BOOGALOO - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016
RE: Post making contest - Kíeros - 07-26-2016 Happy celebrate surprise joy sorrow mad anger hate despondence anxious nervous gleeful excited irate RE: FINGERTIPS 2: ELECTRIC BOOGALOO - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:38 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: » Passes 2 rules and 0 negarules. (07-26-2016, 10:40 PM)Kíeros Wrote: »Happy celebrate surprise joy sorrow mad anger hate despondence anxious nervous gleeful excited irate Passes 0 rules and 0 negarules. RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 Shredded made from chemical pulps are also known as wood-free papers–not to be confused with tree-free paper. RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:41 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: »Shredded made from chemical pulps are also known as wood-free papers–not to be confused with tree-free paper. Passes 1 and 0. RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:48 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: » This broken image passes 0 rules and 0 negarules. RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 If one hand won't work maybe two will - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:49 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: » Passes 0 and -0. RE: Post making contest - Robust Laser - 07-26-2016 (07-26-2016, 10:51 PM)qwerx3 Wrote: » Passes 1 and -0. RE: Post making contest - Ixcaliber - 07-26-2016 I READ THE REST OF THE TITLES AND THIS BOOK IS A FUCKING DISASTER RE: Post making contest - qwerx3 - 07-26-2016 |