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Re: NoNoNightmare - OTTO - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Martusino.
It's just trying to be friendly! Smile back and say hello.
Re: NoNoNightmare - OTTO - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Gimeurcookie.
> Offer it one sandwich.
or
> LUMBERJACK HELP!
Re: NoNoNightmare - OTTO - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Een.
Inform the eater that a perfectly delicious baby was recently seen just past the foothills!
Re: NoNoNightmare - Kitet - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by KittenEater.
![[Image: 73.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/73.png)
Too many thoughts race through your head. You hope the baby is okay.
This Eater looks different. The thought that it might not want to eat you passes through your mind, but you dismiss it. Eaters eat nearly everything. You're lucky that one Eater only ate most of the belongings in your house and not your house itself.
Sandwiches.
Shouting at Eaters does nothing.
Oh god what if it ate the baby THE BABY THE BABY
![[Image: 74.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/74.png)
You run. It follows.
Where are your feet carrying you?
Re: NoNoNightmare - Gatr - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by ~ATH.
> Trip over helpful weaponry.
Re: NoNoNightmare - OTTO - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Gimeurcookie.
> Your feet carry you to a lake because it can't possible drink ALL the water...right?
Re: NoNoNightmare - Whimbrel - 07-19-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Whimbrel.
STORK'S GO GO GO (This is your chance!)
Re: NoNoNightmare - Kitet - 07-21-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by KittenEater.
![[Image: 75.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/75.png)
It doesn't take long to realize the best course of action, even while running for your life.
![[Image: 76.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/76.png)
You're leading it to a place it can be helpful at.
![[Image: 77.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/77.png)
![[Image: 78.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/78.png)
![[Image: 79.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/79.png)
![[Image: 80.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/80.png)
Dr. Stork emerges from the lab to see what the quaking is.
"What is going on in here! I am trying to do something important! wh-"
![[Image: 81.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/81.png)
![[Image: 82.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/82.png)
He seems to have just realized what's happening. However, unlike you, he doesn't run away in time.
![[Image: 83.png]](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/14413662/Nonostuff/83.png)
Dr. Stork and his laboratory are no more. That Eater will be finished within the hour.
You wonder where the baby has gone. Did it leave this world? And if so, where is it headed? Is it destined for a land full of life, a world running with water? Or is it simply heading to another place it will be considered food?
You head back home, your head full of thoughts about the perfect baby's world.
THE END
Re: NoNoNightmare - OTTO - 07-21-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Gimeurcookie.
Beautiful. Though short and simple this is one of my favorite adventures.
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - Whimbrel - 07-21-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Whimbrel.
Yay!
Wonderful story, KittenEater! Simply lovely ^-^
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 07-21-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Martusino.
Nice! Beautiful story here, would love to see more of this world.
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 07-21-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by The One Guy.
Wow, this is the first adventure that I've followed from beginning to end. Great job; this adventure was really good!
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - Gatr - 07-22-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by ~ATH.
Well done. And I detect a sequel hook. Is there going to be a sequel?
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 07-22-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by ProfessorLizzard.
Good job : D
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 07-25-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Hecthur.
Nice. I feel like there were some metaphors I missed, but nice.
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 12-02-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Een.
i love this more every time i re-read it. kitteneater please run away with me [img]images/smilies/icon_heartbeat.gif[/img]
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 12-12-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by Laron.
Aw, I missed it but still a great story. Yay
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 12-18-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by terminalCreeping.
I read two of your adventures back when I first came to this site through a youtube link ;u; Goodness, your story boarding is wonderful! I really hope you go into comics or something if it catches your interest ouo Stories like these are pretty and rereadable and not so predictable. [img]images/smilies/icon_heartbeat.gif[/img] I really enjoyed this one and the one about the child and the bird and heaven fdajsf [img]images/smilies/icon_heartbeat.gif[/img]
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 12-20-2011
Originally posted on MSPA by hero122.
Begin act 2.
Re: NoNoNightmare (nightmare is over) - OTTO - 01-04-2012
Originally posted on MSPA by SandmanEnjoysHonor.
This was the first MSPAFA I read since registering. I love the art style, a lot. It's adorable and makes the dark aspects (like the Eaters and Dr. Stork) stand out all the more. This would make an incredible Limbo-esque game.
I think I'll go read "A Different Realm" right now.