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RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-12-2012

I will start chapter four- if i can do it in the next thirty minutes that is.
By the way that stuff i did for chapter two-
I thought that the girl in the backseat was the girl from the beginning with the doll
I had no idea what zembra was forever 12 and in fact i thought she and hanson were still in their office back home.
then the story continued and it appears that the girl in the backseat totally just killed connie on purpose and not by accident and is also working with someone who may or may not be zembra

and as we later find out the girl from the beginning is Jessica

that's how I interpreted things

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alright, a start to chapter four, have fun!


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Schazer - 11-12-2012

W

wasn't the girl from Chapter One (Jessica) carried off with Chris by SJR?

I guess Slorange's subtle retcon that it was Zembra messing with Connie anyway smoothed it out, but by my estimation Jessica is somewhere near where Chris is.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Dragon Fogel - 11-12-2012

I did mention Zembra's youth a few times, but really, not catching that it was her wasn't that big of a deal. The bigger source of confusion is that my section ended with Zembra falling unconscious and then yours had her calling Connie.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SeaWyrm - 11-12-2012

Oh, yeah. That too.
I'd assumed that was Connie's plan to kidnap her.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-12-2012

what?
...
"He hated kids, and kids who were over thirty were even worse."
oh. Oh. I thought that meant Zembra was over thirty and was acting like a kid. :/
no biggie though!

So, the way i understand it....
Plot summary so far
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character guide: (not very in-depth, doesn't have character traits, for example. i'll leave you guys to fill those parts in if you want)
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Did i miss anything or get anything wrong?

I suspect some people might say that Delia and Zembra are the same girl, but I think it makes more sense actually if you read it where the two girls are different people. That's what I've been doing and it makes sense to me! (ironically but not coincidentally, as the one who authored the apparently most confusing passage, I seem to be the least confused by what's going on)

Maybe at the end we could go back and edit things just a little bit, such as taking out this paragraph
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because it implies that Zembra is in some sort of office typing things and we all agree that she isn't?


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-12-2012

NO RETCONS >:C


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Dragon Fogel - 11-12-2012

Okay, I'm writing now, maybe I can clean up some of the messier bits of plot.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SeaWyrm - 11-13-2012

The only problem with that, Crowstone, is that not only is Zembra not in an office typing things, she should probably still be unconscious at the diner at that point, and therefore incapable of making a phone call.
I like Slorange's interpretation that it's not really Zembra on the phone, it's an impostor.
But... if Connie DIDN'T drug Zembra to make her fall unconscious, then why did she fall unconscious, and what's going to happen to her after? We still need to answer that.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-13-2012

I just figured the bad guy(s) just used their powers to turn the lights out and make Zembra unconscious, then re-awaken her under mind control so that she could make the call.

but imposter works too!

so
that was an imposter on the phone then? And the imposter is the unknown woman?


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Dragon Fogel - 11-13-2012

I just wrote another section, I'm hoping it might clear some things up.

1059 words into Chapter 4, we're catching up.

Edit: It just struck me that it would be more convenient if the link to Chapter 4 were on the most recent page.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-14-2012

In that case, off we goooo
edit: god DAMMIT docs why aren't you working
edit: Opera you are now my writing browser.



RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-14-2012

That took longer than expected o_o


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SleepingOrange - 11-14-2012

Time to do thing in thing I think


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SleepingOrange - 11-15-2012

I'm sorry, I don't think I can do this. I've deleted the tiny bit I managed to write. Someone else please take it from here.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-16-2012

Alright, even though i went rather recently...


And we continue!
Someone elses turn now


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Dragon Fogel - 11-17-2012

And now I wrote a section. Chapter 4 is at 3489 words in total. I'm hoping we avoid just getting into a cycle of the same three people, but hopefully that pattern should break soon.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-17-2012

@_____@ grumble grumble grumble


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-17-2012

4397 words. I have no idea what the hell is going on anymore.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Dragon Fogel - 11-17-2012

Dang it, we did get into a cycle.

Oh well, hopefully somebody other than the three of us can finish off the chapter.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - AgentBlue - 11-18-2012

/me glare of shaaaame


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-19-2012

something something i forget what this originally said


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SeaWyrm - 11-20-2012

Crowstone, are you doing it? Is someone else doing it? Because if not, I'll do it.
Lemme pop on IRC and see what's up.

EDIT: Crowstone has it covered. Guess I'll start the next chapter or something.



RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-20-2012

CHAPTER FOUR aka The Three People Cycle Chapter

Crowstone - DragonFogel - AgentBlue - Crowstone - DragonFogel - AgentBlue - Crowstone

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Chapter 5


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - SeaWyrm - 11-20-2012

Someone else should start the next chapter. Don't wait for me to do it.


RE: National NaNoWriMo Doing Month! - Crowstone - 11-21-2012

(11-20-2012, 11:23 PM)SeaWyrm Wrote: »Someone else should start the next chapter. Don't wait for me to do it.

Alas, we still must wait for whoever that someone else to show up. For whenever anyone is ready, and since it is a new page, the link is here:

chapter 5